Heh, a nice short. And could easily expand into other shorts, maybe even a full story. You metioned the Ascended Alterans, wonder how they would react with someone who has ascended more than them interfering in the mortal plane. Maybe even with the Ori.
Comments from author:
Another 10! Very many thanks - I'm glad you liked it.
The whole time I was writing this one I couldn't decide whether she was going to be a good thing or a bad thing - so I left it wide open for the imagination to play with.
Thanks for the review.
Hugs Jewel
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
There are small mistakes, there are big mistakes, and then there is the type of mistake that comes of ignoring the Wicked Witch of the Western Hemisphere.