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Review of chapter "Family" from Christy
Review:
I liked this duo of stories- I really did....I think you really caught the underlying mixture of things that both Haven and Faith have. Well done
Comments from author:
Mucho gracias, as always the story would be worth nothing without the readers, thank you for the review! :)

Ali
Review By [Christy] • Date [29 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family" from LeaFairy
Review:
Ok, I completely loved this fic! It was such a awesome sequel to "Not your Knight" as well!

I loved the Faith/Haven pairing-- they're really none out there and they fit together rather well. I also enjoyed the Faith being pregnant storyline... It was very well written and I thought you handled Faith's reactions to being pregnant-- Her fear and insecurity of being a mom, extremely well. Very in-character for her. Excellent job.

And I of course LOVED the happy ending with Faith having her happy and healthy family as well... She rarely gets those. Aww, over her and Haven getting married. Simply perfect.

Anyways, I really did enjoy reading this incredible story... Thanks so much for writing!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you thank you :)
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family" from FaithWinchester
Review:
Love this pairing! Haven's always been one of my favorite characters!
Comments from author:
i was so sad that he died even though he was kind of a jerk his character had so many inner conflicts :( thanks for the review im glad you liked it!

Ali
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [29 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
i liked this! it was a quick easy read and the narrative ws interesting, but you really had me freaked out at the accident part... mean girl. glad it all worked out :)
Comments from author:
lol sorry! had to trick you a little bit, just a little ;p glad you liked i live to please and all that jazz!

Ali
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from tals
Review:
Oh this was so lovely. Just left me smiling... On one hand I wanna see more of this in a potential sequel, on the other hand, A sequel would probably have to have some dramatic tension... And you left them so perfectly happy, it's almost too sad to wreck* it.... Faith doesn't get a lot of perfectly happy endings...

*Obviously a sequel wouldn't actually "wreck" anything in terms of storytelling. You could pretty much kill off everyone, have people split up, get sick, or however else you intend to create tension, and I'd still read and enjoy, because you are a skilled writer. I'd just feel sorry for Faith.

P.s. Just realised that dramatic tension doesn't have to come from... you know... trauma. (D'uh!) Like, it could be all fluffy hijinks when little Adonis grows up and brings home his first girlfriend... Not at all traumatic (well, it might be for the girlfriend)...

You know what? I'm all for a sequel! (And you don't even need to give Adonis a girlfriend...)

Sorry for the rambling... I don't usually ramble like this. I think the point is that I loved the story, and it made me smile.

Tals
Comments from author:
lol you are too funny!i had an idea would be tension but...who doesnt like drama?? thanks for reading!

ali
Review By [tals] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family" from fairybloom
Review:
Oooh, a sequel? Please write a sequel! Pretty please? I would love to see them get married. Faith as a blushing bride. Ok, maybe not blushing, but still... ; )
Comments from author:
lol we shall see! :)
Review By [fairybloom] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Doctor said!" from littleoldme
Review:
This looks like it could be an interesting, well-written story, but it only took about two minutes for the second person to give me a headache. Not my cup of tea.
Comments from author:
its confusing but i really liked it, not for everyone, no big.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pride" from fairybloom
Review:
*Squeel* That is so cute! I just knew Faith would be awesome with Adonis. Is the baby going to have any powers? Part lion, with added slayer strength? That would be wicked! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
:-) i'm not sure what powers Adnois will have if he does have a lion it wouldn't come out until he hit puberty if he had slayer strength it wouldn't be full, maybe half and half but again not really sure, it may not even get that far it all depends on the readers :-) Thanks for the feedback!

Ali
Review By [fairybloom] • Date [31 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pride" from tals
Review:
Oh, this is so lovely...

Tals
Comments from author:
Thank you so much ma love!
Review By [tals] • Date [31 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Adonis" from fairybloom
Review:
I really, really like this story. I've never been a fan of second person stories, but after reading this, I'm going to have to change my mind. :) I read this in one sitting, and I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
oohh i like being able to change minds! :) thank goodness there is more hope i continue to please!

Ali
Review By [fairybloom] • Date [30 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seconds" from WinterRayne
Review:
Fantastic update!!!!! Love this Fic!!!
Comments from author:
*happy dance* love that you love it! thanks for reading
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [28 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seconds" from Trace
Review:
*squee* Even if you didn't say WHAT the news was, at least Haven's smiling so it has to be GOOD news, right?

At this point, I don't much care if it's a boy, girl, lion cub, or pterodactyl, so long as all its important parts are there and in working order. (Though, the pterodactyl bit just took me a very scary mental place...)

I do have to say I'm very relieved we didn't have to wait long in suspense there, though I have this niggling feeling you're going to make us pay for it later...

Here's hoping we get another update soon. Let the cute mushiness commence!
Comments from author:
lol would mi do such a thing? ;>
Review By [Trace] • Date [28 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Holding On to Faith" from Trace
Review:
GAH! That was so evil!

You'd better update soon; I don't know how long I can take the suspense with it hanging like that.

I should've known better than to hope for a happy ending. *sulks*
Comments from author:
*hides behind a rock* happy endings are for fairy tales...

Thanks for reading :)

Ali
Review By [Trace] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Surprise" from anyareine
Review:
Awesome chapter.

I love the relationship with all the Scoobies, and the love she has for Angel. I've always felt that their relationship wasn't given enough lime light.

Looking forward to the next chapter, which is hopefully soon?
Comments from author:
thank you! i love faith and i love that angel never abandoned her even when she was in jail my fav episode was the one where she broke out of jail for them. lol. the end is near, there will be updates soon, thanks for reading.

Ali
Review By [anyareine] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Most Men" from FAITHFUL
Review:
Faith a mother? With Haven? Wow! So far love the story. In the books, isn´t Haven with Anita because she is Regina to his Rex? Faith would make a wonderful mother because she´s already thinking like a first time mother with all the worries about raising a child. Please update soon!!
Comments from author:
anita isnt with Haven but i think they are having sex i'm not sure but this fic doesnt follow the books so its okay lol, thank you for reading!

Ali
Review By [FAITHFUL] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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