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The First Maiar: A Slayer's Tale, by Buffy Summers

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Review of chapter "Prologue: Beginning at the End" from Jave
Review:
Love it :). Time for an update!
Review By [Jave] • Date [17 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from Tylan
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. Please write more soon!
Review By [Tylan] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from tigriska
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I really like your story, and even despite the fact that you have not updated for a long time, I still believe in the sequel.
Review By [tigriska] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from ChikaraKatherine
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Much better with chapter 7. Far more understandable and far less complecated. It was really very good. Not that the last one wasn't. It was just very confusing with the two Buffys. Plots good, flows excellent. Chapter 8 very intergering. Got my attention and I'm very drawn in by all the new little details. A lot to think about, a lot to ponder. A most excellent thing. Not sure what I think of Eon. Then again that might be a pet name for someone else. My comand of elvish is maybe three words. Always been a fan of Buffy/Haldir. But enough of my parings love. This was very nicely set out before us the readers from start to finish. All easy to understand. Yet all very complex and layered with hints of this and that. Like good food with a glass of excellent wine. I give this my offical epicaly good stamp. Or in the words of Spike "Neat."
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [26 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from ChikaraKatherine
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I have to admit I'm greatly confused by the whole two Buffy things. It might have been a better idea to give the Maiar/Buffy a different name. The Buffy in Sunnydale seems very broken. I would hope that she get some kind of peace/gift. Her soul was clearly highly influenced by the Maiar. One could say nearly in cooperated into it. Considering whats next to come, (if you go that route.) she's going to need something. Personal I would like to see Willow pay for what she did. You don't bring someone back underground in a coffin. Stupid. This is really good and very interesting. Its just rather confusing at least to me.
Comments from author:
You as well as a few others have brought up very good points and the more I think about it the more I feel that the chapter with Angel was a little ill thought out... Hopefully I will be able to make some changes this week but I'll let you all know when I've updated it... The more I think about it the more I'd like to just let the Buffy from Earth stay dead... So some definite tweakage in order there...

Thanks for your input and the review! I've been trying to get the next chapter started, however I'm currently in the midst of a divorce and custody battle in addition to work and everything else so I'm not sure when I'll have the next chapter up... But hopefully soon! I hope!

Thanks again! Ciao, bella!

*****!!!!!MAJOR REVISIONS FOR CHAPTER 7 ARE FINISHED!! Please go back and reread and lemme know if you like the changes or not! Thanks and cheers duckies! xoxo
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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Hey there. It's an enjoyable story so far and I do hope you plan to continue it. Looking forward to another chapter.

CT.
Comments from author:
Thanks CT! Hopefully I will not disappoint and maybe have a new chapter out within the next few weeks... Here's hoping! Thanks for reading! Cheers!
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from Netchka
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Love the story. More please!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! I'm currently working on the next chapter, however as I told Chikara, I'm currentlygoing through a messy divorce and custody battle so as much as I want to get out the next chappie, I'm afraid most of my writing has been put on hold until this crisis is over! I promise I have not ditched or forgotten this story, it is my baby and I will never let it go! Just very slow going, and for that I apologize! Thank you for reading, and mroe for reviewing! I will try to have an update soon! Cheers!
Review By [Netchka] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from Vickzie
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Wicked story so far!
Comments from author:
Thanks Vickzie. Glad you're enjoying! Thanks for the review! :D
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from HananeELmokkadem
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Hello,
I'm wondering if you're going to finish this story?
It's very good, and I really want to read more.
I liked your portrayal of Haldir and his brothers, and I can't wait to see what's going on with Buffy and her powers. Could you let me know if you're planning on continuing this story?
Thanks,
-X- Hanane
Comments from author:
Hello Hanane!

First of all, a million thanks for taking an interest in my story. I can tell you right off the bat, that yes, I do have every intention of finishing this story... With that being said, however, I only feel it prudent to tell you that it's going to be a very slow and involved process. I have pretty much the entire outline in my head, but because it is so involved as far as ME history goes, it has proven difficult to get out on paper... Or screen rather :P Also, among being a full time single mom, trying to enroll in school again, going through a divorce, co-managing two online forums and working full time at a very demanding job that takes me 3 and a half hours of total commuting time every day just to get to, I have very little time on my hands.

Trust me, I wish I could just sit down and get another chapter out, but its not so easy as it seems when one has as much on their plate as I do. I promise you, I have not and will not ever abandon this story! It is my pride and joy that I have spent the last who knows how many years collaborating on, writing, researching and tweaking where needed!

I can also tell you that words of encouragement such as these are very uplifting to my creative process! So hopeflly, who knows, maybe I'll be able to get out the next chapter here soon! *hugs* Thanks for reading! You can PM me anytime if you have any questions, comments or suggestions! Thanks!

xoxo ~ Betty
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from bradsan
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such a good story and so much fun to read. Totally different from other ones. good job. Can't wait for another update.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much Brad! That is wonderful to hear! I definitely do try my hardest to be different from all those other Buffy/LotR crossovers out there! I am very glad you like my story! I'll try to update soonish, just life is pretty insane for me right now!
Review By [bradsan] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from darkplayer
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Very interesting story. It has a lot of potential. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from oceanluvr
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I am loving this story. I am enjoying your characters and am looking forward to how they develop.

Will done!!! Can't wait till the next chapter!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you oceanluvr! Your words make me happy! Hopefully I don't disappoint in the future! :D Thanks for reading and thank for the ten rating! :D That makes me super, super happy! :D
Review By [oceanluvr] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from randyzoopurple
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i love it can't wait for the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks RandyZoo! That makes me very happy that more than liking it, you "love" it! Yay! Thanks for reading!

Cheers!
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from kittenpoker
Review:
excited for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
So am I! Hope you like it! :D Cheers!
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Dreams May Come" from borgrabbit
Review:
An acknowledging haiku:

Fantastic story
Just now reaching chapter eight
Kind Muse—to thou rate

‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼

Say it in seventeen vowels...haiku!:

Strong coincidence
Thunderous correlation
Explain again dreams
Comments from author:
Thanks! I didn't quite understand the last one though? Are you looking for clarification on the dreams?
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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