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Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from Maryilee
Review:
Wow! I've been writing Early Edition fanfic since the show was in its first season, and I thought I had read all the fanfic for it. (at least, all the good ones! ;-)) but I was so happy to find this site and your story. I'm even more excited that the story is fairly new.

I've never seen Buffy, but I have read another EE/BtVS story many years ago, so I'm a bit familiar with the characters. This was a fun story and having the Sunnydale gang in Chicago and interacting with Gary was great. Rating it a 9 only because it lacked any GaryWhumping. lol.
Review By [Maryilee] • Date [1 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6 - Some Revolting Developments" from Kesomon
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HEEE. If I could fave this multiple times I would. It's so rare to find an awesome new Early Edition story anywhere these days.
Review By [Kesomon] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1 - Morning Delivery" from nemogbr
Review:
Good story. THank you.

I only managed to watch Season 1 of Early Edition. The times became too cofusing afterwards.

Excellent idea for DVDs to be published.

Perhaps you can have McGinty's becoming the local hangout for hunters?

Even turn it into a bar with a Vampire/Demon theme?...lol

Best of Luck with Victoria Olmos. I would like to learn more about her.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from valdimarian
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Back in 99 you could carry swords and such onboard as they posed no threat of puncturing the walls. Alternatively you could purchase a duffel or a golf bag and stick the swords in that. Even now you can transport swords and long bladed objects so long a they're not with you inside the cabin but check it at the door. Yea, they look at you REALLY funny, but they do let it pass.
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [11 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from ReflectionsOfReality
Review:
9 11 screwed up the chance of bringing anything sharp and pointy into the passenger cabin of a plane.

Rating is so high because Early Edition is a favorite series and you managed to work it believably into the Buffy series. I can just imagine what sort of reaction when he calls them to tell them about their high school blowing up and the quarantine for laryngitis and even better would be when he opens the paper to find the Sunnydale sink hole...

You might be able to work a sort of sequel but this is a good story as is. Thanks for sharing it,
~Reflections
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
You did good! I've never read a single cross with Early Edition before, now I find myself craving more... I like the interaction you developed with Gary and the scoobs.... The lady who knew about hydras was interesting... Was she an original character, or was she from some other universe? if oc, she should be back in the next story you write... I liked her.

minor quibble: never saw a need to justify Buffy's admission to Northwestern because of her SAT scores... They were apparently pretty damn good. People get into schools for a lot of reasons. grades are only part of it. I suspect Giles would recommend her very highly too. Even though they're mostly useless, who knows what the evil council is capable of *if* they think it's in their interest?
Comments from author:
Thank you. Ms. Olmos was an original character. Though, I suppose, to protect my legal backside I should have checked the Northwestern U. site to make sure they don't actually have a Ms. Olmos working for them. I would like to bring her back - I'm kicking around the idea of a story revolving around her and Gary, with some Scooby interaction.

True, people are admitted to colleges for all sorts of reasons - but it has been implied that Buffy's grades were poor, and NU is Very competitive. In an alternate universe, perhaps, Buffy would have gone to NU, and there would have been plenty of evil doings to keep her busy. (Anyone who follows Chicago politics would find that very plausibile...)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cool.

Hey, after everyone was slaughtered, would the Hydra have still haunted the lake waters, or would it have vanished when the kid reversed the summoning spell?
Comments from author:
Hmm, hadn't thought of that, since it was always my intention to have Buffy and company defeat it. Since my bad guy was completely around the twist, he would have let it rampage unchecked. So saith the author...
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [16 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
Good story with a great ending (I don't do rhyming reviews, sorry...!)
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [15 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from AngelBlack
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'You must let me in, else people will die!'
Buffy said to the Admissions people with a cry
They thought it over, in the end to agree
'Welcome, Buffy Summers, to our University!'

I absolutely did think
That I loved Giles finding a 'lady friend'
*nudge nudge wink wink*
and that she gave her business card- END
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from cwolf
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Considering all that he's done,
On this mission that was newspaper ran.
Swinging blades, and flying flames,
Cannot possibly make him afraid to take a stand.

(it's been two years since I've written a poem.)
Review By [cwolf] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "7 - It's a Wrap" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cute story. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6 - Some Revolting Developments" from AngelBlack
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I rather like this story- and I doubt that someone like Gary, who saves lives for a living [kinda] wouldn't know CPR =]
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "6 - Some Revolting Developments" from VillageOrchid
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Cool chapter. Been a while since I watched early edition, but Gary used to be stock broker... but a young and healthy one... so good chance he learned CPR at summer camp or in school as part of water safety.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6 - Some Revolting Developments" from azulkan
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Poor Giles...always getting whacked in the head, but still comes out fighting, lol. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5 - Scarier by the Lake" from SamDragon
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Hydra.Just a guess.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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