Review of chapter "Over and Over, Let me Fall" from spring
I love it.
Review By [spring
] • Date [16 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Over and Over, Let me Fall" from mendenbar
Great fun. You should expand on this idea of Angel/Harry.
Review By [mendenbar
] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Over and Over, Let me Fall" from AzureChaos
Interesting idea. I have a few niggles though. Grimmauld Place is in London (England), not Scotland. Angel's eyes are brown (if you chose to make them blue then maybe a note to explain that might be a good idea), also, as the other reviewer mentioned one minute you say he's 21 then say in all his 18 years.
Like I say, I like the idea and if you sorted out the niggles it would be a great story. I do wonder if Harry gave in to him a little easily though, after all, he's spent the last two years bringing up their daughter alone, that's gotta leave an anger that's not gonna just be pushed aside. Surprised he's not hexing Angel into next month lol.
Review By [AzureChaos
] • Date [5 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Over and Over, Let me Fall" from DofEire
Only two small quibbles: Is Harry eighteen, or twenty-one? "never felt so alone...in all of his eighteen years", but just before that he is described as "twenty-one-year-old". Otherwise, nice; slashy but not obnoxious; and little Rosalie is very appealing.
Review By [DofEire
] • Date [5 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Over and Over, Let me Fall" from Doris
Great story but you have written Angel a bit wrong, he has brown eyes not blue.
The first time I read it felt like you couldn't decide who of Spike and Angel Harry should be with thanks to the blue eyes you gave Angel.
Otherwise I really enjoyed this story and little Rosalie is so cute, and the story would have worked with both Spike or Angel as Harry's love interest. Would love to see more of this, maybe a sequel where Harry explains Rosie presence in his life or maybe a look on their love from Angels point of view.
Review By [Doris
] • Date [5 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]