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Review of chapter "A New Beginning or A watchers work is never Done" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Pretty good story.

DO NOT EVER edit primary sources! She might turn over an edited typed copy to the documentary people, but SHE CAN NOT edit the diary, it must remain untouched especially with "personal stuff". To do otherwise is anathema to historians.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [16 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Beginning or A watchers work is never Done" from mtminded
Review:
Scobbie diaries...shouldn't that be Scoobie diaries?
like the story otherwise:)
Comments from author:
fixed Scoobie sp
thanks :D
Review By [mtminded] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Beginning or A watchers work is never Done" from eriktheviking
Review:
Nicely written epilogue.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Total War or The new Dunkirk" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another great chapter, but a couple of errors?

1. Brittan?
2. Her Royal Highness? Shouldn't it be Her Majesty.

Enjoyable as ever, thanks.
Comments from author:
thanks for spotting looks like I was not thinking.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Truth Shall Set You Free or The real Deal" from eriktheviking
Review:
Well written but it feels off with the backing down from the last installment.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost Cause or Ran out of Time" from eriktheviking
Review:
NNNNNOOOOOO!!!!!

Just right for bad news.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Council Edict #201 or We got a surprise Inspection" from burmafrdnow
Review:
if that is not Buffy bashing then what is?
And taken to a ridiculous level. But if that is what floats your boat...
Comments from author:
Just the worst week of Buffy's life seen through Dawn's eyes. It gets better.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [27 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Council Edict #201 or We got a surprise Inspection" from RabidReject
Review:
Good stuff. I like it a lot.
Review By [RabidReject] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Council Edict #201 or We got a surprise Inspection" from eriktheviking
Review:
You are EEEVVVVILLL!!! And it was hilarious.
Comments from author:
thankyou :D
Evil but it was fun
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Council Edict #201 or We got a surprise Inspection" from Tjack
Review:
1) I think I enjoyed this so much because the Buffy character needs to get smacked around once in a while.
2) Only because you asked for editing... I think you've been letting Spell Check call too many shots. it substituted "amour" for armor & "aloud" for allowed. and a strange spelling for caught in the last author comment in the review section.
3) You're right Blackadder Rules!! I was watching my DVD's yesterday.
Comments from author:
she will get better (I hope) but she needs to learn her lesson first. Giles was a but ripperish in his punishment I think. But to be fair he didn't want to be V5'ed
Review By [Tjack] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "They Got High or Never run in the Lab" from PATM
Review:
Pretty funny recollections Dawnie style. I wonder if you meant installation in place of insulation in one of the early chapters?
I'm loving the quick updates I wish I had time to beta these stories and I don't even know what that means. Yeah, a wink to
a blind horse is just as useful.
Comments from author:
I thought I cought all the insulation/installation errors... will look back.

For this one the ideas just keep flowing. I have material for posibly the next five chapters bouncing around in my head. Just depends on how quickly I get them typed up.
Review By [PATM] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "They Got High or Never run in the Lab" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great chapter, well written quirkiness.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [24 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Council Strikes Back or Vengeance" from eriktheviking
Review:
The entry was just right, tight and terse, for the situation. Very well written, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Council Strikes Back or Vengeance" from djhardim
Review:
Okay. One correction in the first sentence of the story.
"These are the locations of three insulations that were taken out last night."
It's installations rather insulations
Comments from author:
Thanks
this chapter was writen quickly and I missed that one.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Geek3PO or My first day on the Job" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written Faith's viewpoint.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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