Review of chapter "A New Beginning or A watchers work is never Done" from mtminded
Review:
Scobbie diaries...shouldn't that be Scoobie diaries? like the story otherwise:)
Comments from author:
fixed Scoobie sp thanks :D
Review By [mtminded] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Beginning or A watchers work is never Done" from eriktheviking
Review:
Nicely written epilogue.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Total War or The new Dunkirk" from eriktheviking
Review:
Another great chapter, but a couple of errors?
1. Brittan? 2. Her Royal Highness? Shouldn't it be Her Majesty.
Enjoyable as ever, thanks.
Comments from author:
thanks for spotting looks like I was not thinking.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Truth Shall Set You Free or The real Deal" from eriktheviking
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Well written but it feels off with the backing down from the last installment.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost Cause or Ran out of Time" from eriktheviking
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NNNNNOOOOOO!!!!!
Just right for bad news.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Council Edict #201 or We got a surprise Inspection" from burmafrdnow
Review:
if that is not Buffy bashing then what is? And taken to a ridiculous level. But if that is what floats your boat...
Comments from author:
Just the worst week of Buffy's life seen through Dawn's eyes. It gets better.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [27 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Council Edict #201 or We got a surprise Inspection" from RabidReject
Review:
Good stuff. I like it a lot.
Review By [RabidReject] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Council Edict #201 or We got a surprise Inspection" from eriktheviking
Review:
You are EEEVVVVILLL!!! And it was hilarious.
Comments from author:
thankyou :D Evil but it was fun
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Council Edict #201 or We got a surprise Inspection" from Tjack
Review:
1) I think I enjoyed this so much because the Buffy character needs to get smacked around once in a while. 2) Only because you asked for editing... I think you've been letting Spell Check call too many shots. it substituted "amour" for armor & "aloud" for allowed. and a strange spelling for caught in the last author comment in the review section. 3) You're right Blackadder Rules!! I was watching my DVD's yesterday.
Comments from author:
she will get better (I hope) but she needs to learn her lesson first. Giles was a but ripperish in his punishment I think. But to be fair he didn't want to be V5'ed
Review By [Tjack] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "They Got High or Never run in the Lab" from PATM
Review:
Pretty funny recollections Dawnie style. I wonder if you meant installation in place of insulation in one of the early chapters? I'm loving the quick updates I wish I had time to beta these stories and I don't even know what that means. Yeah, a wink to a blind horse is just as useful.
Comments from author:
I thought I cought all the insulation/installation errors... will look back.
For this one the ideas just keep flowing. I have material for posibly the next five chapters bouncing around in my head. Just depends on how quickly I get them typed up.
Review of chapter "They Got High or Never run in the Lab" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great chapter, well written quirkiness.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [24 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Council Strikes Back or Vengeance" from eriktheviking
Review:
The entry was just right, tight and terse, for the situation. Very well written, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Council Strikes Back or Vengeance" from djhardim
Review:
Okay. One correction in the first sentence of the story. "These are the locations of three insulations that were taken out last night." It's installations rather insulations
Comments from author:
Thanks this chapter was writen quickly and I missed that one.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Geek3PO or My first day on the Job" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written Faith's viewpoint.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Geek3PO or My first day on the Job" from TweedWizz
Review:
Enjoying your portrayal of Dawn, Xander, and Faith.
Review By [TweedWizz] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Not Rated
