That was amazing! I saw the Hodges bit coming as soon as Buffy got into the argument. BTW, naming the laptop Squeaky is hilarious! Thanks so much for sharing this!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
The originality of this pairing is quite delightful. Hodges is a terrific pairing! (Both stories of the series are a pleasure to read.)
But if I might say this (and don't be offended) you've got to be careful not to over-do it when writing songfics. Yes, the lyrics can set a lovely tone if used sparing - but they really become intrusive when sprinkled heavily through your narrative and actually take us out of the story, reminding us that it is just a story. It can really ruin the flow.
Your story is strong enough without it.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you like the stories.
Thank you for the suggestions, sometimes one can just get all caught up in the song and the story anf forget about the flow. I'll try to keep it mind.
Review By [Wandmaker] • Date [9 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow. This was beautiful. I loved that everyone (meaning, the Scoobies) were so supportive. No breaks in that family. I liked that David finally got to be himself, and loved for it. This was very sweet. I do hope you plan on continuing. Thank you so much for sharing. -MavenAlysse
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Wow, you rock. Seriously, you rock. I liked reading this story a lot. Now, I do not usually write reviews. But I am and rec'ing this as well because you rock.
Comments from author:
No, you Rock! You reviewed, awesome! Lol. Thanks for reading and enjoying.
Review By [MollyAnnise] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
aww . . so cute. I admit, I have a real soft spot for Hodges - he's just so cute when snarky. I'd almost like to see where it'd go from there - meeting the team - maybe watching Grissom freak over vamps or something, but it's still nice and sweet where you ended it!
Comments from author:
Aww, thanks. Feel free to write a sequal if you want, but I don't think I will be. ^_^ Too many other things in the works.
Review By [Malaiaka] • Date [7 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This story is really cute. I wasn't sure i f I would like this pairing it but as you've said:
"Yeah, so?" Nick asked. Wendy threw her hands in the air with an angry noise. Nick continued on. "Just because he's a snarky suck-up doesn't mean he shouldn't be happy."
Comments from author:
Lol. Thanks. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [irialonso] • Date [7 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Cute, horribly cute. :))) Hodges and Buffy ? Never seen this before! And you made that COOL (and CUTE)! It's like pairing Slayers and Vampires, you don't do it! Or no? Or pairing Cops and Thieves... Ok I'm buryng myself. ;)) Seriously, good work.
PS: only one person can irritate Dawn like you did write; McKay!
Comments from author:
Oh, you get a cookie! Good guess. It was a debate between him and Zelenka... But I went with irritated!Dawn rather than cute. *shrugs*
Thanks for reading. Thanks for liking. ^_^
Review By [martelcris] • Date [7 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Not a pairing you see very often but I like it. And I have always felt that beneath Hodges sarcasm is a soft center. It's just adorable that Buffy brings it out. And who is Dawn's astropyshicist? Could that be the next story in the series?
Comments from author:
Oh, good guess! You're very bright. You get a cookie! ^_^ The Dawn pairing is the next in the seiries. I won't spoil the surprise though. Thanks for reading!
Not a pairing I had ever considered. Thanks for letting your imagination free reign.
You really make it work - Buffy and David - the couple that snarks together stays together. ;)
Comments from author:
Lol. I had never really considered it. Hodges is my fav CSI character and so i wanted to do a pairing with him...Buffy seemed to be the only one that really fit to me. Thanks for reading.