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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Muroshi
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As far as I know the only interface port is at the base of the skull. Great story btw wish there were more. Would be funny if Xander could project himself as female with a slight change to his core code he or Willow would find while studying it to find the adaptive antivirus software to join the pairing. She could even trigger the code as a practical joke.
Review By [Muroshi] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Glasbruch
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I pray to the gods of the Internet this get either continued or somebody else picks the idea up, cause it glorious.
Review By [Glasbruch] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil author = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AkashaDrake
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Excellent story, I love the twists.

Well past time for an update, though.
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [16 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LordSia
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Oh, nice. Cool, not to bad writing, good flow, overall, nice.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [14 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from deathgeonous
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This looks both really interesting and good. I hope to see more on it soon, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from aerie
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An excellent addition to the growing list of BTVS Halloween and Halo crossovers! Nice touch on Willow being Samus Aran. Like to see where this story develops from hereon.
Review By [aerie] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Raider
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there are no words for how cool a metroid/halo/buffy crossover is.

that said, xander touching the computer monitor and disappearing into it left me snorting my soda.(that's actually a good thing...)
Review By [Raider] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)ridert
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I really do like this story and I have actually read a couple of metroid on the hellmouth type fics before, but the one thing I haven't seen is whoever becomes samus trying to call in her ship, after all in the later console games from super metroid on, samus's ship is almost as much a part of her as her armour. It would solve Willows maintenace needs and could probably help with buffy's as well. just an idea don't know if you think it's feasable or worth anything or not. Anyway great story so far and hope to see it updated soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from espinosaca
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This is good. I have but one question. You have the pairing set up as Buffy/Willow, since Xander is now more or less Buffy's armor does that mean that he will be pulled into the relationship too? Update soon.
Review By [espinosaca] • Date [7 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Crusifikz
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When I first read the story I thought you were inspired by Haloid. Since it doesn't look like that now you should go to www . gametrailers . com and look up Montyum videos or just do a search for Haloid on the site. You'll love it trust me.
Comments from author:
Actually, Haloid WAS one of the catalysts for this fic. I just haven't had time to get a good fight scene in. Things are developing for now.

And you're right. I love Haloid. Especially the dance-off after the credits. ^_^
Review By [Crusifikz] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CPTSkip
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I am enjoying the heck out of your story. I did catch one mistake. You wrote: Two or three buildings had been decimated. when I think you meant: Two or three buildings had been DEVASTATED. Decimated means one tenth of the two building had been destroyed. Lol!
Comments from author:
*ahem* Move along, nothing to see here!

... Hehe. Yeah. Devastated definitely makes more sense... ^_^
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from cary
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Interesting.
Thx for sharing.
Comments from author:
You're welcome!

Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [cary] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Aquarian
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good story. to help you in continuing the story, the only cybernetic enhancement that might be visible is the neural net port in the back of the neck, i think. thats the only really visible tech alteration, the others done were physical in nature and not easily seen beyond the growth stimulants. however a spartan II's skeletal structure was laced with a ceramic/metallic layer for increased durability (think something like wolverine but not so dense or unbreakable) as well the neural structure of the eyes and information processing of the brain was altered to increase reaction times ect. as to the cyborg issue, well, most of the military in the halo universe have neural nets implanted( in the Spartans case to help control the mjolner armor, and in john 117's case to allow additional storage space for cortana) and the easiest way to describe a 7-8 foot tall, walking, shielded, well, tank, cyborg is what generally springs to mind i guess. for background id suggest reading The Fall of Reach. it recounts the training and specifically the modifications done to the spartan II soldiers.
Comments from author:
That... All sounds pretty cool, actually. Still, I'm keeping the ports. I like them, and they might come in handy.

I will check that book out, though.

Glad you're enjoying the story!
Review By [Aquarian] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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