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Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from twlight
Review:
This is a wonderful story. I do have to wonder though from the AN at the end it sounded like a sequel was being planed, am I correct in my hope?
Review By [twlight] • Date [24 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from Netchka
Review:
So, when's the sequel coming or is it out already? Hope to read more soonish. :-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from ambe
Review:
An unusual and enjoyable story. My only criticism is I think some of the switches between viewpoints were a little rough, and interrupted the flow of the story a bit. My favorite part was Xander's trip through the maze. I'm hoping he doesn't get home yet, but I'm sure whatever you have planned will be good. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [ambe] • Date [29 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from Netchka
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Is there going to be a sequel to this story? I hope so it's good. Xander sure has a way of confusing people doesn't he and then getting what he needs. Hope to read more soon.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from firedrakegirl
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This was quite well written! I do hope there is more to the story than that, though. It was too good to end so quickly.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
please can i have some more to read?

love this very much.

hope your muse gets inspired soon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from Genuka
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ACK! You do know that you're evil, right? I'll be looking forward to when you get around to writing the sequel what with the cliffy and all.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from Rune
Review:
Sequel!

Its great how you had him do it reverse. Xander should get back to his friends but not unchanged, with Three visits Something has to stick. First I think he should be able to do the "mirror trick" and talk to Jareth or any other he met Underground. Second he should find himself able to do magic with crystals much like Jareth, but he should only be able to summon 1 crystal and every "spell" will have chaotic side effects. Its not under his control yet. Third, next time Xander is fated to die he gets transported to the Labyrinth instead, unable to leave until he becomes Fae. And that should take time.
Comments from author:
FANTASTIC IDEAS!!! May I ste.... um... borrow? ::grin:: Thank you so much for the review, it was greatly appreciated. I'll see what I can do about a sequel. :)

-MavenAlysse
Review By [Rune] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from WolfWriter
Review:
This was a great story. In my opinion, the movie was pretty much ignored when it came out, and only achieved a cult following later on.

David Bowie was PERFECT as Jareth, and part of me hopes that he would do a sequel, even if it is over twenty years later.

I'm hoping to see a sequel soon.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from Tamda
Review:
Amazing, I see why this was in the awards.
I am so glad I found this, without the nomination it would have taken sheer luck for me to get such an amazing fic!

Thank you so much for writing it and I hope to read the sequel *very* soon!

Though, being the brat I am, a part of me wants Xander to stay with Jareth, so few chances to slash Jareth and not feel dirty.... ;)
Comments from author:
Wow. What a wonderful review. Thank you so much. I'm very glad that you enjoyed the story (and I was honored when it was nominated for an award!).

The sequel is coming in bits and spurts. But I'm still plugging away at it and hope to have it done in a reasonable amount of time. :)

::grin:: I thought about having Jareth keep Xander - after all, with such a unique mortal, how could Jareth resist? And if I had made the Scooby gang less willing to unite to free Xander from the Labyrinth, then I might just have left him to Jareth's tender mercies. But I love it when the gang acts like a true family and I'd hate to break that up.

As it is, I have a distict feeling that Cordelia may show up on the Other Side to help Xander deal with this new threat. It should be pretty exciting! :)
Review By [Tamda] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from Vorax
Review:
You have my vote and recommendation! I just wish there was more of this to keep reading.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the vote! And thanks for the review!
Once things calm down at school (::praying feverently::), I hope to continue some of my stories - Xander's Labyrinth has a sequel in mind. I just gotta get it down on paper!

Thanks, again!
Review By [Vorax] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from spring
Review:
what happens next? I love this story but it leaves me hanging for more.
Comments from author:
Still trying to come up with ideas. I've got a few floating about, but the muse is taking an extended vacation. If you see her, please let her know I'd like her to come back. :)
Review By [spring] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from Vilkath
Review:
Very Interesting story, best Labyrinth cross over fic I can think of really. Not only is it well written but it's pretty much entirely original unlike so many other fics just follow canon labyrinth events with the new character, same challenges as Sarah and what not.

The story is even 'mostly' complete, unlike most fics this genre which are crack fic like one shots or incomplete. I do look forward to the sequel and honestly hope one the 'other results' of Xander's ordeal is something better then simply going back home.

A nice idea would be perhaps Xander getting his own Labyrinth of some kind to rule. I mean if Jareth deals mostly in unwanted children wished away perhaps Xander could deal with something else? Almost all his parts of his soul deal with loyalty and pack.. so why not have him be ruler of broken trust or something? Where his ordeals are meant teach people to appreciate loyalty, be loyal to others etc? eh the specifics are a bit fuzzy but it would be nice if something rare and strange as Xander's quest was some how the requirements of a sorts to becoming a new Fae lord. How might Jareth of become Goblin King? Did he do a bunch of 'nevers' himself?
Comments from author:
Best Labyrinth crossover? Really? Oh, wow! Thanks so much for the review - and especially for the bunny plots. I'm definitely saving this down for further consideration. There are a few "people" who are interested in Xander - and from what I already have jotted down, he doesn't show back up in Giles' study immediately. Turning him into a Fae lord could be interesting, but the whole reason behind traversing the Labyrinth in reverse was so that he wouldn't have to stay - he feels he's still needed back home.

I like the idea of trying to figure out how Jareth got his title. ::blink:: Boy, thoughts are racing. Humn...


Thanks!
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from Elleria
Review:
Love this so much. You are working on a sequel right?
Comments from author:
Yup. Just as soon as my faithful muse reporter brings me back word of what's going on. :)

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Labyrinth" from ferball
Review:
Just lovely! Really, really liked it! Better than the movie in bits, always thought Sarah was little bit rude and concieted... More some day? Please?

jen
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. :)

I've got a tentative sequel in progress - one in which Xander does not make it home right away and Cordy may end up kickin' some Fae butt.

I loved the movie, and in the book, Sarah's supposed to be about 15. I teach 15 year olds and am sorry to say that she acts pretty on par.

-MavenAlysse
Review By [ferball] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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