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Review of chapter "Insert Alternative Title Here" from LordSia
You're certifiably crazy.
And all the WAFF gave me cavities, lucky I was already headed for the dentist... Damn wisdom teeth.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Insert Alternative Title Here" from Cdog
Not that your stories aren't always good but . . .

Rainbow Brite . . . Reallly?!
Review By [Cdog] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Insert Alternative Title Here" from DigiSim
When you talk about what the Color Kids eat, you should change it to Star Sprinkles. When you say they eat Star Sprites, it makes people think they eat their little furry friends.
Comments from author:
They were just called Sprites on the show, but you are right it should probably get changed, maybe when I'm more awake I'll go back and do that after breakfast. lol
Review By [DigiSim] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Insert Alternative Title Here" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
I had to post this review - you answered my challenge and did a good job of it... and you managed to at least mention four or five other "realities" here that are also off the beaten path - *I'd* never have thought of Jem and the Holograms, that's for sure!

Only true complaint I have with the story is that it could have used a grammar check - minor issues throughout - but overall you did a great job and kept characters in character throughout - nice work with your story.
Comments from author:
Yeah I know I have problems with Grammar, I have a Beta for some of my work but I didn't want to burden him with a whole bunch of non-related stuff. Maybe someday I'll get a couple of other Betas who can specialize on my second tier stories.

I'm glad you liked it, though I probably wouldn't suggest checking out my actual Jem crossover any time soon. I still need to go back and totally re-edit it with major grammar fixes. And I don't know when I'm going to get back to that story yet, I've got so many WIPs it's just crazy and then my muse keeps cooking up new stuff piling up on top of the others. So far this week I've finished off this story and two others I'm going to post that are one shots, then I'm hoping to get back to work on my X-Men cross over and the Spider-Man story.

I loved writing this one though, and perhaps if I can pull it off a Strawberry Shortcake cross isn't too far off. After I get a few other things finished. Or My Little Pony, that one I think would be reasonable fun to try and tackle, maybe nothing more then a total crackfic, but who can say.
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Insert Alternative Title Here" from Fyrloche
Rainbow Brite? Are you on crack? It's a good story and you did a great job telling it but where in the world did you get the idea? I'll say this much, you definately know how to think outside the box. Later.
Comments from author:
To be honest the idea came to me while watching re-runs of The Smurfs and Alvin and the Chipmunks on Teletoon Retro, it's a Canadian station. So yeah, while I was watching them it got me thinking, first it got me thinking about trying to make a realistic Buffy the Vampire Slayer/The Flinstones Crossover where the Scoobies were all living in Prehistoric Sunnydale Rock and all the typical gags seen on the show. But then I realized it would be tricky and so I tabled it, next came The Smurfs and how to get them into the modern Buffy scene, but that fell flat before I could even take a step.
In Unfinished Dreams of a Bard my Alvin and the Chipmunks cross came through.

Then I started thinking about other shows that typically never got a crossover, and Rainbow Brite just hit me, I woke up one night at like three in the morning and just started writing it for a full two hours before falling back to sleep exhausted. And that was just the first two scenes. So I wasn't really on anything, personally I don't take any drugs of any kind, heck I can't even swallow tylenol I have to chew it and that is disgusting let me tell you. So yeah, zany ideas are a dime a dozen in my mind and sometimes they actually work. Wait until you see my next project, it'll blow you away. LOL

Glad the story is getting so many positive comments though, but I just know eventually someone will bad mouth it. Meh them's the breaks.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Insert Alternative Title Here" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
WOW! Never saw that one coming. Great mix of worlds. Hard to believe you pulled it off.
Comments from author:
Indeed, I for one think anything is possible in the written world with the right use of convincing plot elements. Now if only I could figure out the ideal method of actually making a Strawberry Shortcake and My Little Pony crossover. LOL
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Insert Alternative Title Here" from Infinix
Original and most excellent.

Between this and "Xander's Labyrinth" by MaeveAlysse I am incredibly happy about the fics I have read this week.
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting on my story and pointing me to another great fic on this site, you're right Xander's Labyrinth is something else. Now I'd better go leave that review for the author so they'll know. :D I strive for originality in all my works, sometimes it comes off as tried and true, sometimes it actually works. A shame not all of my stories seem to garner that much attention though. Oh well, at least most of them are winners.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Insert Alternative Title Here" from BrotherBludgeon

If someone had told me that I would read a story about Xander in a romantic relationship with a character from Rainbow freaking Brite, and that it would not only make sense but that I would actually enjoy it, I'd have called them crazy.

Now, I'll just have to settle for calling myself crazy.

Seriously, this should've been the most messed up, insanely inane things on this site and, because of how it was written, I literally couldn't help but enjoy it. Me, a guy for whom Rainbow Brite is a punchline in a barely funny joke.

Man, you have got chops.

Blessed be,
-Brother Bludgeon
Comments from author:
LOL yeah, I never knew what possessed me when the ol' Muse popped this one into my head. But I kind of figured it could work, I mean it made sense when I wrote it. So here it is, now if I succeed at getting more people to like it I'll know I've done my job. :D Glad you liked it.
Review By [BrotherBludgeon] • Date [11 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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