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Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from banner
Review:
This is an amazing concept. I hope you come back to this one.
Review By [banner] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Off earth isn't that unlikely considering you know how to handle SG1 crosses and cannon BtVS does have a history of alternate verses crossing into it.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from mikerich
Review:
please you can't just leave us hanging like this you got to add more chappies to this awsome story idea.
Review By [mikerich] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from TheHeartist
Review:
This is a great idea :) As for suggestions...Heroes? Lost maybe? Having Hiro Nakamura join the X-Team would be something awesome
Review By [TheHeartist] • Date [24 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from ladyfiana
Review:
So wonderful. Hope you write more soon.
Comments from author:
I'll do my best
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from ChiVayne
Review:
I hereby do declare
That I really do care
For this story
In all it's Glory
I'm glad you thought to share

I'm no poet
And I know it
Comments from author:
Good lord, my god, egad!
That really wasn't bad
You're just a poet
Who didn't know it
No need to be so sad... ;)
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [15 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from (Moderator)Teri
Review:
Since it is rhyming review day
it has to be this way
I usually don't rhyme
but I will try to this time
This is an interesting start
and the story has heart.
your writing doesn't bore
and I would like to read more.
Comments from author:
I appreciate your review
Your refreshing point of view
Allows for me to think through
What next I plan to do
To present my writings unto you
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from zafaran
Review:
To Rhyme this review, I think I'll eschew.

I'll review another day.
Comments from author:
One who reviews and runs away
Lives to review another day...

That's right, eh? :p
Review By [zafaran] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from daveykins
Review:
It would be a crime,
To make a bad rhyme.
After a story which
gave a good time.

(sorry - that sucks - but the story's rather promising so far :))
Comments from author:
Happy to hear that
Review By [daveykins] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from IcemanII
Review:
Haiku (Great work on this story.
There is one problem at Angel's.
He asked for his own.)

Review: Great work on this story. There is one problem at Angel's Face asked for the A-Team not the X-Team and that is what the NWC is calling the team. I got one thing to ask though is Xander Michael Knight Sr.'s son or Michael Arthur Long's son ie. is he really a Knight or is he the same as Michael an adopted Knight. And I really don't see Xander turning down this job when he hears about it, not if the A-Team was cleared by a military tribunal.

Really hope to see more love A-team and KR
Comments from author:
Okay... Fixed the A-Team/X-Team mixup. Thanks for pointing it out...
As for whose son Xander is... Michael Knight Sr. is the one who was active in the eighties? Nuff said? :p
Biological or adopted? You'll have to wait and see... ;)

I must thank you
For you review
But now its my cue
To leave your Haiku

;)
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from djhardim
Review:
Sorry, I can't rhyme.

Not bad. I'm not sure about Decker though. What he did was cold blooded murder.

Two corrections -
'Face leaned in close. “I have a big problem. It’s not local. I need to hire the A-Team. I traced back their histories, and most of them have ties to your organisation. Please? I don’t have anywhere else to go these days…”'

Organization rather than organisation.

I think that Face wants to hire the X Team, not the A Team.
Comments from author:
Well, Decker is rather screwed up at this point. You've gotta understand that years of frustration at the hands of the A-Team have lead him to a rather disappointing end. Obviously, he's more then a bit unbalanced at this point. His duty-bound pursuit of the A-Team has bloomed into a full-grade obsession and he will do anything and everything to completely his twisted reinterpretation of his original mission.

Organisation is a perfectly viable spelling. I'm Canadian, so is my spelling... :p

Thanks for the X-Team/A-Team catch... ;)

Jasper
Review By [djhardim] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from CPTSkip
Review:
You made me laugh like a loon
Since your story's just a cartoon
But if your story's pure crack
I surely don't give a frak
I just hope you update real soon.

Frak! This rhyming words after midnight is the pits!
Comments from author:
The once was a review in a rhyme
Whose writer thought it was a crime
But come high water or hell, I think it's just swell
So please don't review all in mime...

:p
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from Bobboky
Review:
awsome
Comments from author:
Thanks

I've been plotting this bugger for a looooooooooooong time
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "From A to X: Part I" from tactless
Review:
An interesting start
You have my attention.
But my rhyming is poor
So that's all I 'll mention
Comments from author:
I hope you'll continue
To review in this venue

;)
Review By [tactless] • Date [14 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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