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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from BlueEyedBrigadier
Review:
Well, I guess with Ben around, the Rebellion will have a slightly easier time of things...or at the very least, Luke will get further along in his Jedi training by the time of "The Empire Strikes Back" and visiting Yoda would be more of a skill graduation need than necessity.

Great stuff here, batzulger!
Comments from author:
A new review of the first fanfic I ever wrote!

Thanks. I hope my writing has improved since this one.
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [12 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from (Current Donor)Starfox
Review:
Nice crossover - the changes caused by the Chosen Two seem logical, not too drastic (in the short run) and the dialogue and interaction is very funny, especially Faith.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [9 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from eriktheviking
Review:
It's been a fun read, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from eriktheviking
Review:
In general a well written story but I found it too close to SW canon, especially the speech, given the introduction of F & B, but it got better when the ladies came out to play towards the end.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from GundumM
Review:
it was nice
Review By [GundumM] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from slmncpm
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i did like all of it. *smiles*
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
“Faith, you and ‘the action’ are pretty much inseparable.”

your dialogue is spot on for the Chosen Two!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
"dimension far far away "-- haha.

REALLY like this story so far. I haven't read much in the Star Wars x-overs but I used to be one of the geekiest SW fans ever ;) Plus, anything post-Chosen is always a good time!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from rothos
Review:
Good but it's missing another chapter and could do with a complete read through by you and you evaluating it.
Review By [rothos] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from Nosi
Review:
It was a fun story. I'm glad you intended to focus on the fun, because that's how it read - a very light-hearted and entertainingly fun piece.
Comments from author:
Yeah, there's enough angst and pain in real life, why write about it too?
Review By [Nosi] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the rest of the story, I'll leep my eyes open for more of your fics.
What other animes are you familiar with besides "Bleach"(as I saw in the story area)?
Comments from author:
Thanks! I do appreciate all comments!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Oh come on! They should SO stay!

More please!
Comments from author:
They may come back to the Rebellion...
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from Cmiller
Review:
Yay!! that was great. are you going to do the next movie?
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I'm not sure yet.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from FireWolfe
Review:
Nicely done and cute but eww on the ben thing.
Comments from author:
Heh.
True story, when I was in High School (≈1980), I had a female friend who was majorly in lust with Alec "Obi-Wan" Guiness. She said she just wanted to use him for a while. Over the years I have encountered quite a few women that had that same lust for New Hope era Guiness. Many of them were very cute if not gorgeous. Soooo...
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Great chapter!

BTW: had a question (“Captain Solo, the Imperials aren’t very, so why should we...)
= The Imperials aren't very --what?--
You've got a word missing there.
Comments from author:
Buffy was working off the word 'reasonable' in the previous sentence.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [7 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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