Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from eriktheviking
Review:
In general a well written story but I found it too close to SW canon, especially the speech, given the introduction of F & B, but it got better when the ladies came out to play towards the end.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from GundumM
Review:
it was nice
Review By [GundumM] • Date [24 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from slmncpm
Review:
i did like all of it. *smiles*
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [17 Jan 10] • Not Rated
REALLY like this story so far. I haven't read much in the Star Wars x-overs but I used to be one of the geekiest SW fans ever ;) Plus, anything post-Chosen is always a good time!
Review By [Luna] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from rothos
Review:
Good but it's missing another chapter and could do with a complete read through by you and you evaluating it.
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the rest of the story, I'll leep my eyes open for more of your fics. What other animes are you familiar with besides "Bleach"(as I saw in the story area)?
Comments from author:
Thanks! I do appreciate all comments!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Oh come on! They should SO stay!
More please!
Comments from author:
They may come back to the Rebellion...
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from Cmiller
Review:
Yay!! that was great. are you going to do the next movie?
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen (END)" from FireWolfe
Review:
Nicely done and cute but eww on the ben thing.
Comments from author:
Heh. True story, when I was in High School (≈1980), I had a female friend who was majorly in lust with Alec "Obi-Wan" Guiness. She said she just wanted to use him for a while. Over the years I have encountered quite a few women that had that same lust for New Hope era Guiness. Many of them were very cute if not gorgeous. Soooo...
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Great chapter!
BTW: had a question (“Captain Solo, the Imperials aren’t very, so why should we...) = The Imperials aren't very --what?-- You've got a word missing there.
Comments from author:
Buffy was working off the word 'reasonable' in the previous sentence.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [7 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Aha! So that's why Han changed his mind ! A good chapter, although to be honest Buffy and Faith didn't really seem to play much of a role other than to "persuade" Han to fly. Suppose there wasn't much other type of role for them at this point though. Another thing I just wanted to point out is that on occasion you switch tenses mid-paragraph, sometimes mid-sentence. It jars a little and breaks up the flow of your sentences. Nonetheless, still very entertaining.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know the ladies weren't as front and center as they could be. The main goal of this story was to see how cleanly I could insert the slayers without screwing up the narrative. This is the very first piece of fanfic I've ever written, and I know it's clunky and sloppy and I have appreciated every review that people have bothered to write. I really am amazed that people seem to like this, and maybe I'll keep going with the rest of the original trilogy.
Oooo, you're sneaky! Please continue to keep Luke and Leia away from each other. That was disturbing to see them kiss just to learn they were brother and sister later.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I was disturbed too.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Luna
