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Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from eriktheviking
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A well written and revealing reunion.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from QundraDraconum
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I've been looking for a 'older experienced xander' meets winchester story. The only thing I've seen so far are younger idiot brother ones, and they get annoying fast. I really hope you continue this, as it seems very interesting.
Review By [QundraDraconum] • Date [12 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from Kirallie
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Ever think of doing a sequal?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [25 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from TwistedSlinky
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Dang you! This is too good to be a one-shot. URGG. Anyhow, nice job.
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [29 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from PsychoWing
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This is way interesting. I know it says complete, but I hope you continue it anyway. Great job.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from BluLadyK
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Well first off, I absolutely love this idea. I agree, when most authors make Jess family, they always make her related to Buffy, so I am definitely loving the Xander brother twist.

I'm not sure if this was meant as a one-shot or not, or if you just hit complete by mistake but I think this would make an excellent teaser to a larger, more substantial work. I do think that this story goes a bit too fast, and some details are explained to each other a bit quickly. Overall, it felt a bit rushed.

But again, it lays excellent ground work for future chapters. I think if you expanded on this chapter, adding more dialogue, and descriptions it would really begin to take shape into a truly amazing, epic tale. This leaves so many questions, how did Xander and Sam meet? Was the supernatural involved? Did Jess really know *nothing* or did she have hints? How do the Winchesters know of Hellmouths? What do they know? What did Xander explain? Every incident? Slayers? The basics of the hellmouth?

I really look forward to seeing more in this world you've created. :-)
Review By [BluLadyK] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from Waverly
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Wonderful. I love it.
Review By [Waverly] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from Neverwillmini
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Oooh, I'm thinking the demon didn't realize what he was going to bring down on his head by killing Jess.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from Kirallie
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Good work! Wish it wasn't a one-shot. DOn't think I've seen her as a Harris before, just a Summers.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from (Past Donor)trenee
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oh my God i am sooo looking forward to more of this.. het , gen or slash.. i love this idea.. i never even thought of it from this angle before.. omg.. xander and jess and brother and sister.. with xander being older.. omg i love this idea.. please please .. this was an excellent first chapter .. lol.. continue quickly.. lol ..

edit..

i know it says it's done but come on.. take pity on all us poor people.. lol.. i'm mean seriously .. dean i think would take to the idea of xander going with them to hunt down the yed .. he of all people would know the big brothers drive to avenge a younger sibling .. imagine how over protective he would have been if sam had been a girl.. .. omg man the possibilities.. lol
Review By [(Past Donor)trenee] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from mackenziex
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The yellow eyed demon is screwed. :)

"Congratulations! You not only killed Sam Winchester's girlfriend, you killed the White Knight's sister!" Whoosh! Boom!
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from EgSparks
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lovely !!!! love the idea of jess behing xander's sister, that's really intresting !!! looking for more !;)
Review By [EgSparks] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from mokahi
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Nice. I like the idea of Xander and Jess being family. If you are so inspired, I'd love to read more in this universe.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from TouchoftheWind
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very good, i liked it!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loss of a Sister" from ferball
Review:
This looks really good - want more please!

jen
Review By [ferball] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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