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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
omfg.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [18 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Nakita
Review:
I so hope you continue this. It is really good so far and I love that it is completely different than any other BTVS/Supernatural crossover. Poor Cas though. Wonder if anything is going to happen with him and Willow :)
Review By [Nakita] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mwhahahaha
Review:
I think this is going to be really really good and I can't wait to read more of this...there really needs to be more of these crossovers with Willow.
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bunney
Review:
uh oh willow actually wants to kill something :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Well, it is the Host of Lucifer... ;)
Review By [Bunney] • Date [23 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
This has definite potential, but I'm curious as to if you were intentionally trying to paint Willow with such an unfavoring light or if it was just a side effect of the plotline? I'm not the biggest Willow fan at the best of times, but even I question whether or not she'd toss a soul out of a body just because another being was possessing it.

Of course you haven't actually develop who Richard was so I don't particularly care about the fate of his soul and until you establish his role in Willow's life her reactions to the situation feel forced and very much like plot devices. A little bit of info on Richard would go a long way at this point in your story.
Comments from author:
Uhm, yeah, it definitely has been a side effect... I originally set it up as a comedy, but, uh, clearly it didn't go that way and took on its own life.
In chap 1 I have Willow only being able to sense the slightest trace of 'Richard' left in the body and have Castiel saying that he's been "released from his Earthly duties" as a way of lessening Willow's eventual curse. But, yeah, still...
More on Richard was planned for this latest chap but I've pushed it back to chap 3.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [23 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Blah blah blah and all that shit for angels helping Willow. More Christan shit, you know you could always go the other way and say the angels are minion pawns and such things... but no it has to be blah... Anyways who's Richard and why do they give a damn? That was never explained well. Would sort of be nice if you did. I even looked back to see if it was part of a series and as far as I can tell it's not. So you jump into the middle of things and nothing makes sense. Other than that it's sort of interesting, and I like the idea of ripping apart an angel and making him mortal for his sins. She rip apart that other stupid prick some time down the line.
Comments from author:
Thankfully Supernatural hasn't been all that preachy about the God/angels angle. I'm trying to stick to how the show is portraying the angels, sorry...but they kind of have been playing up the 'pawn' angle.
I actually planned on getting more into who Richard is in this chapter but it's been pushed back to chap 3. Richard is someone Willow was starting to see in a romantic light before he was taken as a Vessel. In all honesty I don't quiet see him as a huge character, his role is more catalyst in this fic.
The angels are just going what they think is right. They are fully focused on the end game, stopping the apocalypse. Pshish, Amabiel is nothing in comparison to the angel Uriel, on the show.
Hopefully I'll be able to answer more of your questions in the next chap.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [23 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Red
Review:
I think the host is going to be Sam in so many ways. I can't wait to see what you do next. Please up date soon.
Comments from author:
Sammy seems to be set up to be the Host...or at the least be the next Big Bad on Supernatural. I'm trying to get more out asap :)
Review By [Red] • Date [23 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tanydwr
Review:
*Please* tell me Willow fucked up. *Please.* Because there's powerful witch and then there's angels and God. I'm sorry, but there's not really a contest. Plus there was a huge arrogance in 'the Council does not miss things like 'The End of Days'' - when it becomes obvious they have.

Sorry. Willow pissed me off a lot in the last couple of seasons. I kind of want to see her knocked down a peg or two. It'd be hilarious if Richard was picked because he was devout and Willow never knew it and it had very little to do with her or the Slayers.

Nevertheless, this seems like a fascinating premise for a story, and I look forward to reading more, especially regarding the Winchesters' and Castiel's reactions to Willow's actions. And you explanation for the Powers That Be vs God. Then Lucifer.

I'm also looking forward to your opinion regarding Dean's resurrection.

More soon!
Comments from author:
Willow did do a bad thing. In all honesty, I think if we're to believe that Willow was capable of ending the world then it's a definite possibility of her being able to harm a lower level angel like Castiel, especially if he's residing in a human at the time.
Willow was my fav character throughout the series but she definitely has her flaws, especially in regards to relationships and magic.
Yes, when meshing the world of BtVS and Supernatural it's lots of fun trying to suss out the whole Powers That Be vs. God (and vampires for that matter). I'm working on it though!
Ask and ye shall receive, hopefully you enjoy the latest chapter. Thanks for reading!
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngelBlack
Review:
still.... THEY TOOK RICHARD!!!
But I love Castiel... perhaps he can be persuaded to 'see the light'?
Comments from author:
I love Castiel, too. Best addition ever. I also love reading everyone's thoughts on who his Vessel is/was and couldn't help taking a stab at it. See the light...what light? :)
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mandac
Review:
liking this so far. can't wait to see what happens next :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. Hopefully I don't disappoint...
Review By [mandac] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
Interesting start. I'd love to see where things go from here and what happens when Sam & Dean encounter Faith & Willow next.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm hoping to add more Faith to my current layout, as I do love the character, but I'm never happy with how I write her.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HeatherDee
Review:
This does look quite promising. It's a good start.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Hopefully the rest lives up (at least a bit!).
Review By [HeatherDee] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Red
Review:
I would love to see you write more to this story
Comments from author:
I hope to be able to see this plot bunny through!
Review By [Red] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eponine
Review:
Nice.
Comments from author:
Ta!
Review By [eponine] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bex
Review:
oops
Comments from author:
Just a smidge :)
Review By [bex] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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