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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kovac
Review:
Cordelia and the Doctor's voices are spot-on and I really enjoyed reading this encounter between these two amazing characters. Too bad there are no crossovers in TV shows. I think a season of Doctor Who with Cordy as the guest, annoying the Doctor in questioning everything he does, taking charge or trying to, fighting aliens by his side... It would have been pretty entertaining. Alas... Your fic would make a very good episode of that never to happen show.

Thanks for the nice read.
Comments from author:
Sorry, Kovac, that it took so long to get to you, but I actually haven't had much time for fanfiction lately. Hopefully, with my classes almost over that will change. Thank you so much for your fantastic review! I really appreciate your taking time to type one in. The fact that you believe my story would have made for good television is an honor. I myself had thought such a thing about a fanfic, and have told the author so, but I never expected such high praise to be sent my way (though I did hope)! Thank you again, Kovac!
Review By [Kovac] • Date [29 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lanta
Review:
Aww, I liked this :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :-D
Review By [Lanta] • Date [23 Mar 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Loved your story. You did a magnificent job with both Cordy and the Doctor. But I so wish Cordy had gone with him. sigh.
Comments from author:
I was THIS close to doing that! Really! But in the end I felt that her going with the Doctor would have been out of character. Thank you very much for your very kind words!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from draconis
Review:
Fun story. Looking forward to more.

Don't be afraid to use stronger words. Given her experience and environment, I really just can't imagine Cordy saying "poo". Willow? Yes...Cordy? no.

It is a shame that the Doctor didn't convince Cordy to travel with him. It is hard to believe she wouldn't accept an invite to a mega-mega-mega mall.

Since as he said if she was returned to the same time she left, her not so nice destiny with AI wouldn't necessarily have been changed. (although I really didn't like the way they used her character in the series)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your wonderful review! I absolutely appreciate the frank and honest opinions you've just given me, but I do respectfully disagree with at least one of them.

You are, of course, entitled to your own opinion. Heck, I think I might've agreed with you initially, as I did first write Cordy's dialog with a more, *ahem*, seasoned slant. However, for some reason it never rang true to me. Not until I rewrote some of that, did I fee it came across more naturally. Weird, I know. I mean, even the word "crap" didn't seem right! I think maybe it was because she teamed up the the Doctor? On his show the language is as clean as the driven snow, and because of that I must've felt subconsciously guilty about throwing in dirty words. I really don't understand myself sometimes. I don't.

I thank you again for your fantastic and insightful comments.
Review By [draconis] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KylieL
Review:
Wonderful! Is there going to be a sequel?
Comments from author:
Absolutely! I've already got the first paragraph almost definitely planned out.

Thank you very much for reviewing!
Review By [KylieL] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Scrappychic
Review:
What a wonderful story. The characters were completely spot on. I had to put down my coffee a time or two or I might have spit it all over myself.

I do hope you're going to write the next story where The Doctor meets Cordelia for the first time. (in his timeline) I'd love to read it.

I actually had an idea for a story somewhat similar in that the first meeting with one group is the second meeting with the other group and vice versa. Only it was involving the entire Scooby Gang circa season 2 or 3. Maybe this will encourage me to actually get around to writing it.

Great Job!
Comments from author:
I hope you get around to writing that story. I'd love to read it! High School Scoobies are my favorite Scoobies!

And if something I've written actually gets other people to write? Wow. That's the best compliment I could ever receive.

Thank you so much for commenting on my story.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Carnen
Review:
This? This is a thing of beauty! Wonderful interaction between the two. And yay! for a mention of Captain Jack :)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your kind words. I worked very hard on getting the dialog right and it's absolutely rewarding to see that others enjoyed it as well!
Review By [Carnen] • Date [20 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
This fic? Made of WIN! You wrote those two very well!
Comments from author:
You should've seen the first draft of this I wrote. Was total FAIL. The words were clunky and nobody seemed like they were having any fun. Especially me! Well that's not true. I actually really like writing dialog. And rewriting it is kinda better. Especially if the dialog is actually better.

Thank you very much for the awesome review!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusRowland
Review:
The Doctor needs to be more careful - he's run into people in the wrong order too many times, and the results are rarely good.
Comments from author:
The results may not be very good for him, but I've always found them to be fun. And really, isn't that the important thing?

Thank you so much for your review! I have a lot of respect for your writings and seeing that you've left me a comment was the highlight of my day!
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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