Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
BerserkerNWReview:
Wow. I see why this was nominated. Wonderful story. Thanks for much for sharing! I like the dialogue between the two, even if it was stilted. Will Zuko ever learn exactly what she gave up?
Comments from author:
Wow, thank you! And one day he'll understand, but they've got a long way to go.
Review By [
BerserkerNW] • Date [23 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
LunaReview:
You know I remember reading this a while ago but realized I must not have left a review. Anyways, I love seeing some Dawn/Zuko interaction :) I'm a big Avatar fan and adore the idea of Zuko & Dawn :)
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm a die hard Zutara fan at heart, but Dawn/Zuko is very cute too. He's a love-able angry jerk and she's a brave little spaz. Its a match made it heaven ;) And also very fun to write.
Review By [
Luna] • Date [2 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ScreamingFlamingosReview:
Oh, that was wonderful! Each learning a word in the others language. Nice little moment.
Comments from author:
thank you :)
Review By [
ScreamingFlamingos] • Date [24 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]