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Review of chapter "Intrusion" from RedCalypso
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Very true to Pansy's character, but you KNOW that Buffy and Willow aren't going to let it stand...
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Rune
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Oh please!

Pansy imperios Xander and then Willow and Buffy bring the whacked out wizzy world to RUIN!

I can see it now, Willow gets her hands on a wand, and uses it to form a magical link to ALL wands. Then she snaps it, and all wands are snapped. A death eater is captured and Willow drains all of them dry of magic thru the dark mark.

Pure Bloods are Pure Brainless dead men walking.
Review By [Rune] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from spring
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Hmmmm...... Intresting.
Review By [spring] • Date [5 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Duskie
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AAAh! bursts into tears.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [5 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Dark and very believable. Excellent!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Wow! That was simply amazing! The curse was a complete shock to me, but it was... jaw dropping... fabulous!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Dec 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Oh, very interesting twist at the end. I totally did not expect it, thought it fits well with your image of the perfect princess. Pansy stayed true enough to her canon character to make this ficlet dark and sort of chilly, but nicely done. All I have to say is,"poor Xander." He really does date all the demons...

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Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [9 Oct 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Yikes. Poor trusting Xander. What is it about him and vicious women?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Sep 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Good Story, even if I didn't really like the end. You caught the characters very well (though I can't say too mauch about Parkinson as I haven't read much HP) and it is very belivable that the story proceeded as it did.
I have just one little critique: the part about Xander having no magic - he managed by reading one word aloud from a tome to set it alight, if that isn't a sign of magic I don't know (but I do know that it is a sign of bad writing/plotting on ME's side that they didn't develop something out of that). There are other things that could point towards magic or something in this direction (e.g. the Trollhammer that hut Glory, but he ony got a concussion and iirc a broken wrist after being hit by the troll)

Well besides that little point (that can be easily removed by saying it is Buffy-AU) a really good story.
Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Sep 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Anonymous Reviewer
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omg, that was so...GREAT, like...i loved how you made pansy out to be and its like, the ending was so horrible, but it fit so perfectly. i loved it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Sep 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Anonymous Reviewer
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::claps:: Definitely didn't expect this one...Thank you for introducing me to a couple even I didn't think of...:) While I was a little mad at the Xander-bashing, it just suits Pansy. :) Sorry, Xander...
LOVE IT!!!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Sep 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intrusion" from Anonymous Reviewer
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the last words that left my mouth upon finishing this were "holy hell jinni"!
that was...wow....i mean, i didn't expect that ending, not at all, but i guess it should have been expected, to some extent.

wow...where do you come up with this stuff? can i borrow your muse for a while? mine seems to have gone on a long sabbatical from the crossover front...
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Sep 03] • Not Rated
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