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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vickzie
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Lol that was a good story and i liked how you just kinda slipped Jeanne in their lol
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
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Wonderful ending to a delightful story!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kweandee
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Awww how cute :)
Review By [kweandee] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from andystreetuk
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Sweet story :)
Review By [andystreetuk] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cutiepie
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Funny! But Dawn or Tony should have told Elizabeth just what "busty" means when it comes to being a new mother: it means that she can feed the baby. Really nothing sexual or "adult" about it. Yes, I know that Tony didn't mean it that way, but . . . =]

OK, I'm confused about the ages here, having just read the previous story updates. In "Twilight", Elizabeth is already four, but in this one, you said that she will be turning five in three months. Mathematically, that seems awfully rushed. Gestation takes 40 weeks (or 37 here since Tony said that he thought they had 3 more weeks), and a year is only 52 weeks long. That means that Dawn and Tony fall in love and get married, then pregnant in less than three months? (I'm not sure just how *much* less than three months, since I don't know how long Elizabeth has been four.) I guess it could happen, but still . . . very rushed.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [7 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DesitaniaF
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so sweet!!! Oh god, Tony changing diapers? "Boss, what did you feed her? This could be counted as a biological weapon!" "It's just a dirty diaper, Dinozzo." Squee! I really like
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
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This is a wonderful series so far i do hope that you write more.
Review By [twlight] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
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Great job! Loved your characterizations. Absolutely hilarious...especially loved when Tony let Elizabeth decide if they'd take the baby home. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from firedrakegirl
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Love it!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from firedrakegirl
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I love this series, though I'm a little confused. Is there a pre-series for this series.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HebiR
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Would love to read that middle story.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
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Aw! This was such a sweet ficlet! I love that Dawn had another baby girl. Gibbs and Tony's talk about the girls never dating was hilarious. *chuckles* And Tony's and Elizabeth's conversation was too cute... He makes a wonderful father. *sighs*

I'm dying to read your main NCIS story that goes with this series that you haven't posted yet! I'm really curious on how Gibbs is Dawn's father... I also really look forward to reading the beginning of Dawn's and Tony's relationship...

Anyhoo, this was lovely. Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from angeluscado
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I really like this series and can't wait for the longer fic you have planned. Good work, so far.
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [21 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MisAnthrope
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I love this series. Can't wait for the next story to tie it all together. Gibbs whacking Dinozzo on the back of the head is just classic.
Review By [MisAnthrope] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
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Awww...!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
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