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The Beginning: Xander Harris's Bad Day

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from thekellylynn
Review:
Oh, wow! This is awesome. I can't wait for the next story! ^_^ Please tell me there's more!
Review By [thekellylynn] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TurquoiseGirl
Review:
Oh gosh, I can just see the infamous Resolve Face originating from Xander. The series sounds interesting. Will we see the events that caused the guys of Baker Street Investigations to leave their respective places in life? Or will they be mostly referred to in flashbacks and accepted given facts? There is a lot of potential here. Happy writing!
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [24 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from felicia
Review:
Wow! All of my favorite guys working together! What more could you want? I can't wait to see why all the guys left their groups and how their former friends are going to deal with a very possesive Xander. He was always my favorite Scoobie. Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the lovely review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.
Review By [felicia] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MavenAlysse
Review:
OH, wow! Now, this sounds fascinating. I've always loved the original Baker Street Irregulars, and having the "kids" of each group joining up together as PIs ... Terrific! Of course, with Xander claiming them as family ... and well aware of how their original teams hurt them, or allowed them to be hurt ... I'm a-tingle with excitement. What's going to happen next? (and, you explained what happened to the other groups about various non-deaths - and that Xander didn't lose his eye -- but how did Tara end up there?)

Thanks for sharing! Looking forward to the next installment.

-MavenAlysse
Comments from author:
Thank you for the lovely review! Tara and Xander will be explained at the end of the series, though that does not preclude me from dropping hints throughout the other stories. The whole idea for the Baker Street Investigations series came from the thought of "what would Xander do if confronted with the people who hurt his family?"
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PsychoWing
Review:
This is good and a great start to larger story (is it going to be one? This is marked as completed so if it is, is it going to be as a new story or continued as this?) I definitely want to read more. If you write more, will you be including what prompted Xander's people to leave their old teams (yes, that includes the Winchesters)? Regardless, I hope you post more soon! ^_^
Comments from author:
This is the start to a series of stories, each of which will focus on a separate crossover series. I'm glad you liked the story so far. Thanks for the review!
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlackRose
Review:
You had my attention, the moment I saw all my favorite guys names listed in the summary. I'm just glad they are all okay. Stella and Aiden warning to Mac had my crackling with laughter. And everyone better be careful when dealing with a protective Xander, no one mess with his family. I will be looking foward to the next story.
Comments from author:
The whole idea of Xander laying the smackdown on people who messed with his family is where the idea for this fic came from. Yeah, there all fine and in each of their stories, we will learn just why they left, how they were recruited and maybe an adventure or two :-D It all depends on when I get my muses and bunnies cooperating. Thank you for the wonderful review!
Review By [BlackRose] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ishtara
Review:
More! More! More! Pweeese?! With sugar on top and chocolate covered Xanders?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Mmm, chocolate covered Xanders... *drools* Anyway, more is on its way once I manage to corral my muses and bunnies into cooperation.
Review By [ishtara] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cjdunk
Review:
More now. MORE MORE MORE MORE
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! More wll be coming as I get the muses and bunnies to cooperate.
Review By [cjdunk] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sabinbc
Review:
great start. Xander can be such a bulldog about those that he considers his, i can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!
Review By [sabinbc] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ladyfiana
Review:
That was well done. I would really like to see what happens next. Xander can get mean and protective of his people. I see a smackdown coming from him and Tara. Hopefully you'll explain how Tara is among the living again. I hope you write another story telling how Baker Street Investigations got started and how everyone got recruited. Hope you write more soon.
Comments from author:
I'm really gland that you enjoyed the story. I do have plans to explain everything eventually. Each crossover series will be in its own story and how that person was recruited will be explained. Thank you for the review!
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Cracking good start, but please make sure to explain why they are thought to be missing, when surely they would have to give details, fingerprints for PI licenses?

Well done & thanks.
Comments from author:
They're not so much thought to be missing but rather, they left and have kept their locations a secret. But don't worry, it will all be explained :-D Thank you for the review!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jenniferw
Review:
I love this. I hope you continue with it.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [jenniferw] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
Yes! This is just what I was looking for. I hope you find lots of inspiration to continue - maybe some back stories of past cases, or how Xander came to start up the agency, etc.?
Comments from author:
There will be bits and pieces of all of those but also focus on how the various characters came to be recruited. Then there's the others coming in trying to get their people back. I'm so pleased you like it. Thank you for the review!
Review By [neverwill] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DennSedai
Review:
*smirks and cackles* Uh huh, I see Xander breaking bad as he's already had one of those crappy weeks and cases. Plus these are 'his' people now since they left the idiots they used to work with because of various reasons. *shudders* Somebody's going to get hit up side the head.
Comments from author:
Oh yes! That is where the entire idea for the story began-- what would Xander do if otherstried to take back the people he decided were family. Thank you for the review!
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
This feels familar. It seems to me that there have have been other stories where Greg and Ryan left their jobs. I don't recall the stories. Part of this overall series?
Comments from author:
Not part of mine. I know I've seen many of these characters leaving at one time or another in a variety of stories. But I have plans! Thank you for the review!
Review By [djhardim] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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