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Review of chapter "Fifth Year" from Zarohk
Review:
This story is truly delightful. Even your OCs are totally in character. i love that Christine feels the urge to lay on her stomach and present her neck to Faith, who is a clear alpha.

Also, to respond to Faith's thought:
"Fuckin’ wizards who started it all, grabbin’ the first of us and sacrificin’ her to a demon, they musta been dirty old men. Got no other reason for adding to the Slayer stuff the detail that none of us is ugly or some kinda dog."
There's a much worse reason. The Shadowmen weren't perverts; they just knew that pretty girls made better bait. And, of course that is the reason why the Slayer is who she is (young, attractive female): to literally look "good enough to eat" so that the group most at risk for being meals are the ones who can fight back.
Review By [Zarohk] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Second Year" from Zarohk
Review:
Okay, I like the story in general, but this chapter is a bit shaky in who Xander's "evil" blind dates are.
"his blind dates had been a were-leopard, the last priestess of a minor demonic cult, and a Democrat"
* Were-leopard? Oz had been a werewolf, and there was never any problem with the Scoobies because of that. I can't see Xander having a problem with a were-leopard. A leopard who was a were-human might make sense. 2/3 for logic.
* Minor demonic cult priestess is totally up Xander's alley, and that totally makes sense. 3/3 for logic and funny.
* Democrat? Okay that's just a political cheap shot that doesn't even make sense. His best friend Willow isn't in the closet, and it wasn't the Democrats who want to make it illegal for her to get married. 0/3 for cheap shot and no logic to it.
Review By [Zarohk] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from Fayari
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I actually got every reference in this fic except for the Stepmother Alien thing. Was that kid really Alyson Hannigan? Damn my VHS...
Review By [Fayari] • Date [4 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Review:
Awesome! :) Very well-written, especially this part:

Putting her cellphone back in her jeans pocket after arranging her flight to Berlin, a fuming Dawn Summers stalked over to her bedroom closet to pull out her suitcase, and then she tossed that piece of luggage onto the bed. As the furious woman headed for her drawer to get her clothes for the coming trip, her irate mutterings under her breath finally became intelligible.

“Stupid, stupid man! He drags me from work, scares me half to death, and for what? I’ve been basically waving myself under his nose for years, and now he’s noticed me, but the only way he can show it is by making a prank call on April Fool’s? Just to ask me about my bra? What is he, five years old?”

Dawn paused in front of her opened top drawer, with an armful of clothes, and then she whirled around to hurl her blouses, pants and other garments, one after the other, as hard as she could, in a paroxysm of rage aimed directly at the suitcase. Her vastly-amused unseen watcher was quite sure she had an entirely different target in mind, that of a certain male human’s frantically ducking head. Her next words proved him right, as the younger Summers sister screamed at the top of her lungs.

“YES, HE IS! THEY ALL ARE!”

Standing in the middle of her bedroom, swaying, and clenching her crooked fingers as if in practice for sinking her nails into the cowering flesh of a male nincompoop, Dawn unseeingly glared at a bedroom wall, and hissed, “Xander, Hurricane Dawn is headed your way, and the only thing you can do is dive for cover, kiss your butt goodbye, and pray for mercy! With any luck, I’ll actually think of providing that on our fiftieth wedding anniversary!”

At her last words, the woman blinked, and her face smoothed in astonishment at what she’d said for the first time ever, finally vocalizing her deepest hopes and desires.

Taking in several deep breaths, a thoughtful Dawn then walked again to her drawer, closing the open top compartment and bending down to pull open the bottom one. From the very back of this, she took a plain brown package, tearing off its wrappings to reveal one of the most heart-stopping creations from Victoria’s Secret, a matching minuscule bra and panties set, crafted from sheer silk and a pale blue in color.

She spent a few moments rubbing her fingers against the texture of the silk panties, enjoying the slick smoothness, before setting the bottom half of the lingerie set on top of the drawer. Dawn then held up the wisp of a bra in both hands in front of her body at chest level, smirking at her image in the drawer mirror. Staying in that posture, she then cooed in her most evil tone at her reflection, “So, Alexander LaVelle Harris, you wanted to know about my bra? Well, tonight in your hotel room, you’re going to come back after a hard night of Slaying, to find me in your bed, dressed in just this! And that night’s going to end in only two ways: with a marriage proposal, or your cooling corpse!”

It was at that point that an angelic hand waved, causing the image of a beautiful, sexy, confident, and very determined young woman to vanish, while Saint Peter then leaned back in his chair, and roared with laughter for a very long time.

Very extraordinary, and very well-written, too. :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
I enjoyed this story, the ending was a bit soppy but overall an interesting concept.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [22 May 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Truly delightful! Now let's see what happens at the wedding!
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [24 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting end. Any chance of a sequel or another character?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from Wolf
Review:
Cute. Nice and sweet.
Thanks.
Review By [Wolf] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from (Current Donor)Feynor
Review:
I loved this. Though it could be fun with a little epilogue where Xander enters his room, finds Dawn...and faints.

As for the Kitchen Confidential. Anya could have planned an even worse scenario, or follow up: Going to another slightly different restaurant, where Sarah plays the cook: The film is "Simply Irresistible" (It's a weird film where Sarah plays opposite Sean Patrick Flanery, women might love it).
Review By [(Current Donor)Feynor] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from OLazyOne
Review:
Pretty good story.

Nice ending. Some of it was a bit hard to connect in the earlier chapters. Thanks for including the crossover list at the end. I managed to find out most of them myself but some including the Ad ones I needed a little help with.

Bravo on the creativity though. Using the actors different movies was well thought out and relatively original.
Review By [OLazyOne] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from CPTSkip
Review:
RAOTFLMAO! Excellent, if a bit strange, ending to an excellent, if a bit strange, story. You made me laugh a lot at your funny but surprisingly sweet story. And I thought you even did a very good job with everyones' characters. I look forward to reading further stories from your twisted imagination.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conclusion" from Mcspender
Review:
Awww, Anya was the mastermind behind all the weirdness =)!.
And the Twinkie incident... Bwha ha ha ha!!!.
Thank for such a delightful series =).
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [20 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fifth Year" from Almadynis
Review:
*laughing uncontrollably* I can't wait for more, this is hilarious!!!!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fifth Year" from PATM
Review:
A real Xander treasure with sneaky tricks to enjoy. I think the Twinkie is to be inserted before his mouth emits a sound.
Hilarious!
Review By [PATM] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fifth Year" from CPTSkip
Review:
I find your whole series, so far, to be delightful. Your characterization is perfect and you have a real knack for writing Xander. I look forward to seeing just who or what is messing with the Xan-man and if he will ever find True Love again. Thank you for all the laughs along the way.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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