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Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from SpacedCadet
Review:
PLEASE finish this!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Another great story in need of expansion!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [12 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from nomorebread
Review:
Wow! Great story! I wish you would update it. It's too good to leave unfinished.
Review By [nomorebread] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Like the story, love the concept! You ever gonna come back to it?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from Godogma
Review:
I still want to see what happens next, I've been rereading old favorites and this is one I'd definitely like to see continued.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful story, any chance of this continuing?
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from LostDragon
Review:
Truly a great opening any chance of you adding to it?
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I do still have all my notes and such for this story and plan on finishing it, eventually. Lately I simply haven't had the free time to write much more than a quick one-shot drabble fic.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Such a good beginning deserves to have a great story attached, so please do more !
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I do still have all my notes and such for this story and plan on finishing it, eventually. Lately I simply haven't had the free time to write much more than a quick one-shot drabble fic.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
Review:
Very interesting would like to see this story continued
Comments from author:
Thanks. This story and my LotS fic 'In the Blood' are actually the stories badgering me the most to be written right now. It's just finding the time to actually write :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from FemXanderForever
Review:
Yeah, you REALLY need to update this.

Seriously, I'm liking the story and everything, which is rare when it comes to JL/JLU Xovers.

FemXanderForever.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it despite not being your usual fare. Not sure when I'll get an update out, but I do have most of the story plotted out.
Review By [FemXanderForever] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from Acheloo
Review:
Amazing story so far: Please update it soon!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I plan to eventually.
Review By [Acheloo] • Date [26 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
I'm deeply impressed and hope you update this one sooner or later. I'll be tracking it - it was a nice break from homework I needed to be finishing (winks at that)

Thanks for writing this - I loved it!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it so far and I have every intention of finishing it eventually. Once time constraints and laziness allows it anyway.
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
I am so looking forward to the next chapter. It's not even funny. Please do the big reveal to Xander soon. Oh, Boy are the girls going to be eating out their livers, over them not grabing Xander when they had the chance. As for Clark, he may became very arrogant. Afterall 'ONCE YOU GO GODDESS.
THERE'S NO NEED TO BE MODEST.'

Peace
Comments from author:
lol! Can I use that line? I can't picture Clark saying it, but I could someone like Plastic Man or Guy Gardner after it comes out that Superman and Wonder Woman have a kid. The look on Clark's face if they say it in his (considerable) earshot would be priceless.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
This is COOL! I wanna know more! Will you ever update this? I love it. I almost died laughing when Xander figured out he was floating then BAM! Hit the car with his face. I'm sorry but it was funny. I don't know why it just struck me as funny. That was great. But seriously. This is a really awesome fic. I wanna know more and yeah.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it so far. I didn't want Xander to get everything right off the bat, so when I had him thrown through the wall the face-plant just seemed like too funny a it-could-only-happen-to-Xander moment to resist. He should think on the bright side; sure he likely has a broken hand, a severely bruised back, and sore face, but he might just get the redhead's number...

Anyways, yes, I do plan on updating. I was actually rereading what I've written and going over my notes for this story just a few days ago. There are other plot bunnies that are more persistent at the moment so I'm not sure when I'll get around to updating, but I haven't abandoned this story by any stretch. If anything my notes are getting more detailed while I write and post other fics, which will help when I finally sit down and work on this one.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Safer Places" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on this chapter, I'm hoping that you'll add more soon.

-Any chance of bringing in the character Madame Xanadu?
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Not sure when I will get around to updating, but it will be substantial when I do. I plan on continuing with longer chapters like that last one. I know where I want to take the story and have fairly detailed notes on what I want to happen in each chapter. No plans for Madame Xanadu to appear, but you get the Council, Amazons, the Kent's, and Gods all in the next chapter.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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