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Sweetness and Sorrow

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
It's nice to see this glimpse of what happened when Xander left Danny for that Apocolype.

btw - I think you left some editing notes in, there a paragraph that is written two different ways in the middle.
Comments from author:
Yep, was in a rush and missed that. *sighs* Long day and going in to many different directions. Took care of that now. I'm working on the third part, which is being very fickle at the moment *sighs*
Review By [neverwill] • Date [4 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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