Review of chapter "Newest member of the City Watch" from draconis
Good start. Nice compositing. The luminance on Buffy seems just a tad bright compared to background. I think it brings her too much 'forward', if you know what I mean?
Might consider adding some text to your descriptions that tells reader either which story (or stories) inspired the image, or if it was a story you'd like to see done. Perhaps even include hyper-links where possible?
Review By [draconis
] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]