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Review of chapter "Halloween" from Bluesnowman
Review:
pretty good so far.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [10 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween" from CPTSkip
Review:
How long was your version of Helloween? It seemed a bit short. Or how far was the chemical plant? How much of the warrior stuck to the teacher? More information needed. Please update ASAP. Thanks for an interesting and different story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparing for a night out" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like how your story is coming together. I always enjoy a story where we get to see the oddness that is Sunnydale from a normal person from outside the influence of the Hellmouth. Plus, anyone who hates the little Ferengi can't be a bad guy. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "School days" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I'll admit, it's been a while since biology class, but, in order:

1) the largest organ is the skin.
2) no-one discovered it, Charles Darwin *theorised* it by running comparisons on creatures' development in isolated and different enviromental conditions, leading him to propose that creatures adapt to better survive and thrive.

I'll leave the rest, but I am interested in how it goes..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparing for a night out" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "School days" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "School days" from war
Review:
interesting seating plan. he seems to know something about sunnydale so it should be interesting to see why he went there.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "School days" from djhardim
Review:
Looks good

It's been awhile but

1. What is the largest organ in the body? Skin
2. Who discovered the theory of evolution? Charles Darwin
3. Who developed the system of binomial nomenclature? Carolus Linneus
4. Who discovered genetics? Gregor Mendel
5. What is the chemical that provides energy for cellular respiration? ATP
Comments from author:
Very Good 5/5
Review By [djhardim] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Interesting beginning. The way Joyce seemed to just rush off seemed a bit forced, but what the heck? Maybe she had something to do back at the house. I wonder if Mr. Smyth and Mrs. Summers might end up in a relationship. That should drive Buffy nuts. Lol!
Comments from author:
I'll take that under advisement for a later chapter.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
interesting start looking forward to more.
Review By [war] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RafMereC
Review:
Kool.
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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