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Review of chapter "Permission" from lunalurker
Review:
I really enjoyed this story. The viewpoints worked really well, and it was great to see some rare love for Lorne, too.
The song was perfect. Ever since I tripped over this great fan video, I have strongly associated Brothers in Arms with Buffy and her friends.
Thank you for writing. :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Permission" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Excellent story.

Good view of an outsider's perspective of Sunnydale

Great insight into how Lorne's mind works.

Nice assortment of demons and problems

Hmm, Giles does spend a nice long and peaceful summer break between 6&7 in England with Willow. His trips during Season 6 were, I expect, kinda tense.
Comments from author:
This was an old story of mine that I've adopted into my Daria series. Except for continuity errors, I try to make those stories canonical. Most people have Lorne passively read people; I tried to make him a more active participant. And the three futures are a side lesson that no one has an immutable destiny.

I'm surprised no one said anything about Pip, the Maxwell's Daemon.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [4 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Permission" from JasonBarnett
Review:
pretty obvious they weren't ready to stand on their own.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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