Review of chapter "Permission" from lunalurker
I really enjoyed this story. The viewpoints worked really well, and it was great to see some rare love for Lorne, too.
The song was perfect. Ever since I tripped over this great fan video, I have strongly associated Brothers in Arms with Buffy and her friends.
Thank you for writing. :)
Review By [lunalurker
] • Date [7 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Permission" from Shieldage
Good view of an outsider's perspective of Sunnydale
Great insight into how Lorne's mind works.
Nice assortment of demons and problems
Hmm, Giles does spend a nice long and peaceful summer break between 6&7 in England with Willow. His trips during Season 6 were, I expect, kinda tense.
Comments from author:
This was an old story of mine that I've adopted into my Daria series. Except for continuity errors, I try to make those stories canonical. Most people have Lorne passively read people; I tried to make him a more active participant. And the three futures are a side lesson that no one has an immutable destiny.
I'm surprised no one said anything about Pip, the Maxwell's Daemon.
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [4 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Permission" from JasonBarnett
pretty obvious they weren't ready to stand on their own.
Review By [JasonBarnett
] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated