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Review of chapter "Reinforcements PT 1" from AstridWinchester
*sigh* I do love Z...This site needs more DH action, some are OOC and some are boring. This is niether, you did good on the characters and catching the reader's attention. Kudos :)
Review By [AstridWinchester] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Control" from draconis
Definitely looking forward to the sequel that wraps all this together. Want to find out what Styxx, Dion, and Cam get up to, whether we survive it, and whether Faith listens to Cordy as per Lorne's advice.

I thought 'Faith AD' a good improvement over 'Faith BC'.

Can't believe Simi blew through Ash's credit card like that. Just how many QVC sub-channels does she watch at one time?
Comments from author:
Well..she does shop like a demon! Thanks so much for reading!
Review By [draconis] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Control" from lindiel
Ooo!!! I'm glad to see this updated!!!! You know what the cool thing is? A few weeks ago I decided to start re-reading my DH books in order from the beginning (starting with Fantasy Lover ) and I just happen to be about half way through Knight Embrace, then I see this fic updated, one set in the book I'm on!!! BTW, if your beta needs won't take up too much time, I'd be willing to help out, because I am definitely familiar with the DH world.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for reading and the beta offer :)
Review By [lindiel] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Control" from Eirliel
I'm familiar with most of it, and what I don't know, my friend Julie does. We've been trading books back and forth, for a while so if you have any other fandoms you were thinking about using, we might be able to accommodate you there as well. As for my editing skillz, they are mad (that was a horrible way to put that, but I couldn't resist). I always have a horrible urge to fix other peoples' writing, but I restrain myself. Especially the spelling faux pas... drives me up a wall. You seem to be doing really well on your own, but I assume the reason you have such a space of time between postings is because you've been doing all your own editing. I know that takes forever, what with you fighting your brain to fix the problems you didn't see the first, second, or twelfth time.
My name's Arrana by the way(that would be using all soft 'a's), and my e-mail address is if you would like to talk to me about the beta-ing.
Review By [Eirliel] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "After Effects" from buffyandspike
Awww the ending was a little bit sad. Ash really should have more faith in himslef. Pun not intended. But really it's so sad that he doesn't trust Faith enough that he thinks she is going to be mad at him. Anyway great chapter, can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
'more faith in himself' LOLz. Thanks for the R & R! all compliments and encouragement are appreciated!
Review By [buffyandspike] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Murphy's Law Pt 2" from buffyandspike
Well that was something at least, I just can't wait to see what happens next. I'm a little bit scared for what's going to happen to Ash when Faith finds out what Artimis is doing to him, or rather what he's letting her do to him. I'm also wondering how Ash is going to bring Val (I love him!) around when Talon is around. Because they will make each other weak.

Can't wait for more, just keep um coming!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the R & R!!
Review By [buffyandspike] • Date [25 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Murphy's Law PT 1" from buffyandspike
Grrr! You leave me wanting more, so so much more! Of course as always I liked it of course, I just want more. But don't mind me I like to complain, good job really. I always like to congradulate writters when they write, don't know why, but I know it makes me feel good. So congrats on writting someing good!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Reviews make me feel good! Sorry so impatient waiting on my Beta so I went ahead and posted the first half of the chapter...hopefully more soon.
Review By [buffyandspike] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "God of War" from RemyDesire
Yay, an action chapter!

This might be a couple of chapters too late, but what I don't understand is why are only Faith and Cordelia sent to New Orleans if they think there's going to be an impending apocalypse? Are they gonna get backup?
Comments from author:
I'm sorry did you say 'only Faith'? *sighs, shakes head* JK. But seriously they went to NOLA to check out Cordy's vision. Since it's AtS S5 the fang gang is gearing up for the big show down with the circle of the black thorn and Buffy & CO are in Europe or Japan somewhere. I think Faith will manage to kick plenty of ass on her you can imagine she's gonna be pissed when the tranquilizers wear off!
Thanks for the R & R!
Review By [RemyDesire] • Date [12 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "God of War" from buffyandspike
Holy Man! That was intense! Well okay, not really intense, but exciting. I can't wait for more! Keep it comin', doll.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the encouragement! It's always nice to get a pat on the back :)
Review By [buffyandspike] • Date [12 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reunion" from Almadynis
More please!!!
Comments from author:
Beta-reader's taking finals hopefully more soon. Thanks for reviewing!!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [5 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reunion" from blackmirror
Great chapter. Loved the UST. And hope Faith is not just going to let herself let kidnapped, and will kick Styx's ass. Poor guy has no clue what he is about to get into...
Comments from author:
Well, you know Faith...lust for the fight can lead to recklessness...'sides Ash wants to save the day :)
Review By [blackmirror] • Date [5 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reunion" from buffyandspike
I love it, and can't wait for more! I want to know what's going to happen so badly. I hope nothing too bad happens.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for your encouragement! I appreciate it.
Review By [buffyandspike] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements Pt 2" from silentflux
I'm loving every chapter more and more :) I love how your twisting canon in Kenyon's books just enough. Can't wait for that next part - Faith and Ash finally together again!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing! I am working hard to make the 'reunion chapter' a good one :) Also thanks for the comment on my changes to canon - sometimes it's hard to tell if I'm making it different enough.
Review By [silentflux] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements Pt 2" from amari
Me like! I'm a huge fan of the Dark Hunter series (and Jaden in particular...poor tortured nummy soul that he is) and I like how you've kept to canon as much as you could but still managed to achieve a voice of your own.

Will Faith and Zarek meet? I hope they do. It'd be interesting to see how they'd interact, especially because it often seems like there's no in-betweens with these 2 characters...they'll either get along like a house on fire or try to rip each others guts out. I'm voting for option 1...babes in leather need to stick together.

Looking forward to the next update!

Btw, where has FaithBC gone? I couldn't find it =(
Comments from author:
Thanks for the R & R! I am considering my options on the next phases of the story...I think Zarek and Faith will be meeting up...she and Cordy will definitely be interacting more with the DH's very soon. [FaithBC was right where I left it - under the same heading as this fic.] Thanks again!
Review By [amari] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements Pt 2" from RemyDesire
I was so happy when I saw this second chapter! Thanks so much! Faith BC was actually what got me started reading the Dark Hunters series. :D
Comments from author:
The DH series is a fun world! I'm glad you are enjoying my series and hopefully I don't ruin any canon surprises for you. Thanks for reading & reviewing!!
Review By [RemyDesire] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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