Ok, I TRIED reading this series a while back, and, while I DID like it, I got, interrupted, shale we say in my reading of it. I intend to correct that now. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Not Rated
I don't know how I missed this first time around (in fact, I somehow missed everything except your Rayne WIP, perhaps because I initially found your work on LJ), but well done!
I look forward to reading the rest of this series, since I'm a sucker for Stargate crossovers.
There was a sentence at the start of the chapter that I recall had a few typos you might want to correct some time, if you get the chance: should be "WORST few months" and "TORRENTIAL rain", rather than 'worse few months' and 'torrent rain'.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [23 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Wow...I can't help but wonder what Lorne thought of John's future when he saw it? I also love to think of that coin toss being the point where the Vegas 'verse breaks off from the canon timeline. Nicely done.
I am ashamed to say that although I absolutely love reading your fics, this is the first time I have reviewed.
I LOVE this one. Beautiful use of Edmund Burke's words, beautiful insight into the character of John Shepard and a touching remembrance of the big, green guy.
Thanks for writing it,
Min
Review By [Minuet] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]