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Review of chapter "3" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Well written and interesting story, very original idea.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
thanks :) I have a sequel up right now, called In session.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [21 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yes, I was one of the people who nominated this story for this years CoA and I still hope that you one day will get inspired to write a sequel to this story.

I nominated this story in four different categories.

The Categories I nominated the story in are:
Best Portrayal of a Villain
Best Portrayal of Faith
Best Movie Crossover
Faith's Horrible Award

::Gives the plot bunny a serving of Liptauer::

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An honest politician is one who, when
he is bought, will stay bought.
- Simon Cameron
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Comments from author:
Thank you so much, that is really flattering. I am actually considering writing a sequel but right now I have no ideas.

edit: Sequel currently up and in the works, entitled In session.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
That was f*cked up... But in a really,really good kinda way!
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I currently have the first part of a sequel up, In session
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Arekanderu
Review:
Whoa. Intense
Comments from author:
good or bad? lol
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [27 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from PATM
Review:
Fantastic. Only saw the movies so his voice is what I'm stuck with, and it was pretty close here. Faith was really
falling apart and deserves a follow up. I don't think shaft was the word that you need to describe a weapon, try
"shank". It is a sharp object that doesn't need to have an edge it only needs to be sharp,very deadly.
Comments from author:
Good point. I"ll have to fix that, thank you.

edit: Sequel currently up, entitled In Session.
Review By [PATM] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from FireWolfe
Review:
You know a sequel would be great. It would be wonderful if Lecter actually helped Faith find herself. There was never any doubt he was a good doctor even if he was a phcyopath. It be nice if he had one small redeeming feature. I admit to likeing the charater dispite his evil nature. Or maybe because of it. Never could figure that one out.
Lisa
Comments from author:
I love Lecter...evil fascinates me when they are multi faceted. No sequel but I'm glad you enjoyed.

edit: sequel in the makings, currently up, entitled In session.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [16 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Almadynis
Review:
Very nice. Is there a sequel in the making?
Comments from author:
Nope, sorry
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [18 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from kylebayne
Review:
From the way you're writing Lector's voice, it seems this is based on the books, rather than the movies. That being the case, do you have any plans on how Hannibal will deal with Mischa's ghost within his memory palace in this fic? It was his interaction with Clarice that lead to the events allowing him to deal with it in the books. He also has yet to meet Will Graham, but I think someone like him would still be investigating the 'cannibal murders', so do you think the two will finally meet here?

Now that the questions are out of the way, I'll get to praising you. I've read all the books several times, and your characterization of Dr. Lector is spot-on. His voice, the way he looks and acts, and the way he sees everything all at once - and draw conlclusions from it in the blink of an eye is very well described. Thomas Harris himself would be flattered. Please, keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much :) I have both read books and watched the movie, so I suspect my portrayal of him was based upon both in an odd crossing. I'm muchly flattered by you saying that. As for all your questions, this was just a short story idea I had, I will most likely not continue any further. Thank you for your compliments!

edit: Sequel currently up, entitled In session.
Review By [kylebayne] • Date [16 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from FireWolfe
Review:
This needs a sequel. It is one of the best pieces I have seen you write. More soon.

Lisa
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I will consider a sequel but right now I have so many other ideas that it's not looking likely.

edit: Sequel in the works now, first chapter is up, called In session
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from CJNyfalt
Review:
Great story. Will there be a follow-up?
Comments from author:
thanks :) nope, sorry

edit: Sequel currently in th works, first chapter posted, called In session
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from DaBear
Review:
Neat xover idea, you nailed the voice of Lector! the word usage and tone were wonderful
Comments from author:
Thank you :)

edit: Sequel in the works, posted as In session
Review By [DaBear] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Naitch
Review:
You just NAILED Lecter in this story. Very well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you :)

edit: sequel currently up, entitled In session.
Review By [Naitch] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from HeatherDee
Review:
This was quite good. The only issue I can see is that that unrequited love angle doesn't really ring true. If he had focused on her need to be a part of something it would have worked better. That was Faith's major issue. The world essentially threw her to the dogs i.e. her 'parents' and for that reason she was convinced that the world deserved to burn.

At least that's why she joined the mayor. He gave her the love she needed and the world, well, no great loss yes?

Still pretty good though.
Comments from author:
Faith didn't necessarily love Buffy in that way, although the story does imply that. It is canon that she wanted Buffy to love her in some way, as the First pointed this out to her, butyou are right that she wanted to bepart of something and to be loved by SOMEONE. I think because Buffy was most like her, she wanted them to be separate and special from the "lesser" non slayers. I'm glad you enjoyed though

edit: sequel currently up, entitled In session.
Review By [HeatherDee] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from Dragonelf
Review:
Excellent story. I loved the way you managed to get Dr. Lector under her skin.

I hope you will get inspired to write a sequel to this story and this story got added to my list of COA potentials.

::Gives the plot bunny some Scooby Snacks::

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Prepare for trouble, and make it double
To protect the world from devastation,
To unite all people within our nation,
To denounce the evil of truth and love,
To extend our reach to the stars above
- Pokémon (Team Rocket motto)
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Comments from author:
Wow, thanks :) Were you one of the ones that nominated this? If so I thank you. Glad you enjoyed
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Fyrloche
Review:
*whistles* That was good.
Comments from author:
thanks :)

edit: sequel currently up, entitled In session
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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