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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapters.

::Gives the plot bunny some Shrimp Sandwiches::

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The true measure of a man is how he treats
someone who can do him absolutely no good.
- Samuel Johnson
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Ramenth
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Wait. Hold on. Hold the hell on.


What's wrong with sauté? It's like the easiest way to cook something.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from arkeus
Review:
going slow, but i love it so far :3
Review By [arkeus] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of story "Salix Industries" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Carrot Salad::

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Joy is the simplest form of gratitude
- Karl Barth
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Jul 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Salix Industries" from CPTSkip
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Very interesting, and confusing, story. But confusing isn't bad. I like trying to put the puzzle together before you explain what is going on. I look forward to more of your fascinating story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Salix Industries" from batzulger
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I love in media res stories and having to try to figure out what the rules are. Great so far, and the kids are neat.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Salix Industries" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from arsinuwin
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I wonder what will happen now that Wllow or Sarah as she is called now has discovered energies emitting from the Order's headquarters. I like what you did with her and I look forward to what part she and Salix industries will have in the Wizarding war so please update soon.
Review By [arsinuwin] • Date [3 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
Will you be doing a bit more of a backstory to this to explain how/why Willow and the others are in this world/reality/dimension?
Comments from author:
Yes, I wanted to do it in this chapter but I couldn't do it without it being a large badly written exposition. I'm working on it but hopefully it won't take more than 2 or 3 chapters to cover the basic back story with holding anything relevant to the plot.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad::

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The only good is knowledge and
the only evil is ignorance.
- Socrates
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad::

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Cogito cogito ergo cogito sum
(I think that I think, therefore I think that I am.)
- Ambrose Bierce
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HeatherDee
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This looks like it might be the start of something very good.
Review By [HeatherDee] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neverwill
Review:
Interesting start. I'm also wanting to know why Willow is going by another name (is she undercover?). Is 'Carys' going to turn out to be related to Ianto or Gwen from Torchwood? (The whole being Welsh, making huge technological leaps - with little formal education, and the also mentioned Cardiff as a site of interest). It'll be interesting to see if you're pulling together alien, demonic, magical, and the Wizarding world. I can't see the majority of the Wizarding world handling this at all well. Most likely, the only ones to see the possibilities would be the younger set who are blocked from any real advancement in the Wizarding world either because their families aren't important/rich enough to have good contacts, they're muggleborn, or their half-bloods.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Frogsareevil
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Slightly confused... e.g. why is Willow pretending to be Sarah? Where are the rest of the Sccobies? But i suspect that will be revealed in later chapters. Overall, it is an interesting start, i hope to see more soon!
Review By [Frogsareevil] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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