Yay, new chapters.

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The true measure of a man is how he treats
someone who can do him absolutely no good.
- Samuel Johnson
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Wait. Hold on. Hold the hell on.


What's wrong with sauté? It's like the easiest way to cook something.

going slow, but i love it so far :3

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Joy is the simplest form of gratitude
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Very interesting, and confusing, story. But confusing isn't bad. I like trying to put the puzzle together before you explain what is going on. I look forward to more of your fascinating story.

I love in media res stories and having to try to figure out what the rules are. Great so far, and the kids are neat.

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I wonder what will happen now that Wllow or Sarah as she is called now has discovered energies emitting from the Order's headquarters. I like what you did with her and I look forward to what part she and Salix industries will have in the Wizarding war so please update soon.

Will you be doing a bit more of a backstory to this to explain how/why Willow and the others are in this world/reality/dimension?

Yes, I wanted to do it in this chapter but I couldn't do it without it being a large badly written exposition. I'm working on it but hopefully it won't take more than 2 or 3 chapters to cover the basic back story with holding anything relevant to the plot.

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The only good is knowledge and
the only evil is ignorance.
- Socrates
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Cogito cogito ergo cogito sum
(I think that I think, therefore I think that I am.)
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This looks like it might be the start of something very good.

Interesting start. I'm also wanting to know why Willow is going by another name (is she undercover?). Is 'Carys' going to turn out to be related to Ianto or Gwen from Torchwood? (The whole being Welsh, making huge technological leaps - with little formal education, and the also mentioned Cardiff as a site of interest). It'll be interesting to see if you're pulling together alien, demonic, magical, and the Wizarding world. I can't see the majority of the Wizarding world handling this at all well. Most likely, the only ones to see the possibilities would be the younger set who are blocked from any real advancement in the Wizarding world either because their families aren't important/rich enough to have good contacts, they're muggleborn, or their half-bloods.

Slightly confused... e.g. why is Willow pretending to be Sarah? Where are the rest of the Sccobies? But i suspect that will be revealed in later chapters. Overall, it is an interesting start, i hope to see more soon!