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Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from demondude
Review:
diffindo is a cutting spell, reducto is the exploding spell
Review By [demondude] • Date [4 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Lots of fun...but unfinished!

Please do more.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [10 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from Izar
Review:
Diffindo is NOT the spell to make things explode, Reducto makes thing explode Diffindo is a cutting spell
Review By [Izar] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from discordlives
Review:
I really like this story, but there was one thing in the last chapter I had an issue with. You used the word effect a couple times in the paragraph about the different spells and you should have used affect instead. Other than that it was really good!
Review By [discordlives] • Date [28 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from Bobboky
Review:
very cool, though the spell you used at the end I thought was a cutting spell, not an explosion spell
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks! :-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from kalepos
Review:
One minor nitpick, 'diffindo' is the basic cutting curse. I think that you mean 'reducto', the basic blasting curse.

Other than that, it's an excellent chapter.
Comments from author:
You know, I went back and double checked. You're right. It probably should have been reducto... Shhh, don't tell.
Review By [kalepos] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from mackenziex
Review:
I loved Buffy's reaction to the Diffindo on a vampire!
Comments from author:
Yeah. She's an old hat at exploding demons. It's the mess that bothers her. I mean, don't want to ruin the shoes, now do we?
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Great "South Park" line, and valuable bit of learning experience about how messy an exploding vampire can be!
Comments from author:
The Kenny thing wasn't planned, but it fit and I think it worked out good. And yeah, exploding vampires are messy. Very messy.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from VivianCaidin
Review:
Looking forward to the next chapter in this story.

Its great!
Comments from author:
Hopefully it won't be too long now. It's mostly done...just needs to be edited a bit.
Review By [VivianCaidin] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
This story is pretty darn good. I like it. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :-) Glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never 'Diffindo' Vampires" from banner
Review:
"You killed Kenny!"
That was the best part of a hilarious chapter. The sunlight spell would be great against a crowd of vampires, or when Slayers and demons are fighting in close quarters. They better run that test immediately.
Comments from author:
The whole Kenny thing wasn't planned, it was just a great opportunity that I couldn't pass up.

And I think you're right about the sunlight spell. If it works against the vamps, that would be the best and safest way to go. Even if all it does is make them stop attacking and cringe back in pain instead of dusting them.
Review By [banner] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Dirty Job" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Love the Padfoot treatment! Is there going to be a 'ship in the future?
Comments from author:
Thanks! He really does need it and deserve it after the crap hand life dealt him.

As for 'ships...hadn't really considered any to be honest. For one, Padfoot is a lot older than the gang and for another, he's not in a real good place emotionally. He doesn't want to settle down; he wants to get back home to Harry. Maybe once some of his issues are resolved or if the answer to getting him home is found one way or another that might change, so you never know...
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Dirty Job" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Hilarious, and heart-warming (or heart-worming)!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. I always felt kind of bad for poor padfoot. He was such a scraggly dog that was in need of some serious TLC. What's more, I always got the impression that the Order was more interested in using his house than making sure he was happy or healthy, ya know?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Keeping the Faith" from zafaran
Review:
More, more, more, please. I've added this into my tracking so I can see the updates. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
*grin* I'm glad you like it. It's an odd little story that soothes the part of me that still hasn't forgiven Rowling for killing off Sirius. I enjoy it. Updates are sort of irregular, but I do work on it and post when bits are done.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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