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The Emperor's Key

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bushranger
Review:
Hmm, so the Immortal is Slaaneshi? Hmmmm...
Review By [Bushranger] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from eriktheviking
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A well written and entertaining story.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
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So, the core of Angel Investigations, Angel and Spike, along with Illyria survived LA. But, being in Spain is not the same as being in Rome. And that is where the problems arrise.
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Harry
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Sounds like the Immortal is not the nice guy that B thought he was. Its time that this bum was paid a visit by some very powerful allies. And he WILL pay!
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Introduction And Teaser" from Harry
Review:
I have to admit, I don't know much about Warhammer. So, my reviews may be off somewhat. But I think that B is being DUPED and duped big time! The Immortal doesn't care about her. He has some other project in mind and she is the key to it. As for Dawn, we know that they are after the Key. Question is, who will succeed first?
Review By [Harry] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SamDragon
Review:
Nice start.So they live.But how will the Emperor's people react to her.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from tals
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I don't know the slightest thing about Warhammer, except I think I once saw some Warhammer figures at a local comic store. But you've intrigued me with these chapters; I've tracked the story. And despite the fact that I don't know the Warhammer figures, I don't feel lost in this story, I feel like you'll explain/show/tell me what I need to know about these characters in due time, and I'm already getting a sense of what type of character Logan is... although I am wondering about his size, and about the whole bionic thing. But it doesn't throw me off. You give me enough characterwork to give me a feeling that there is something compelling there, that there's a story behind these people/creatures (they clearly aren't human). Nice work. It isn't everyday I can just jump into something entirely new, and feel "secure" in the story.

Tals
Comments from author:
Thanks. I know its not exactly a main stream thing warhammer. The trick is Dawn and the Gang don't know anything about it, so you use them as a proxy to explain to the readers.

But if you want exposition the next chapter has most of it. I'm just editing it now...
Review By [tals] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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