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Review of chapter "Two" from PATM
Review:
Very nice, can't wait for more. Buffy seems excessively weepy here and I don't believe it would happen. Apparently this Vincent guy has the power of making women weak spirited. Maybe I'm offended by his power and therefore jealous?
Buffy is the Slayer ya know? Quippage required soon.
Comments from author:
Buffy's been unconscious for most of the story and is only now getting better. While I do like to hurt Buffy a lot, I do not like a "weepy damsel" anymore than you do. Give it a chance.

Thanks for you feedback
Review By [PATM] • Date [16 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
VERY enjoyable! I hope you continue with this crossover tale.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from ranlynn
Review:
okay, one? 'the Ghost' is good for the 'real' title.

And two? KEEP GOING! this is GOOD! :)
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Two" from KzintiKiller
Review:
The writing quality and storytelling are really superior. B&B was my first fandom too...pre-web. But it's been so long. Father is still alive, but obviously not in the best of health. Is this post-Catherine? If so, where is Vincent's son? Won't the Scoobs have the mini-slayers turning the Big Apple upside down looking for her?

*sigh* The handling of B&B towards the end bugged me. Killing Catherine off ruined the show as far as I was concerned. They should have ended it when LH wanted to leave, letting V&C grow old together. Then again, if they hadn't screwed it up, you wouldn't have this lovely window to work with. Buffy as a romance beats the hell out of Diana.

I look forward to seeing where you take this.

KK
Comments from author:
Yes, this post Catherine. They do have the mini-slayers out however it takes them a few days to get stuff working. It takes them over 12 hours to realize she's missing, though I won't go into that much. The person I'm writing this story for wants it between Vincent and Buffy as much as possible. Its my muse that is making it into more than I had planned.

Vincent's son, Jacob, is off to.... College, yeah, that's a good place for him to be unless someone protests or the muse throws a curve.

Thank you so much for you feedback!
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Cool, Buff is wanting to mack on Vincent. It doesn't really come as too much of a surprise that she would see his 'deformities' from a different point of view. Heck, I bet part of her thought Clem was cute - in a puppy-ish sort of way. Excited to see where you are going with this and to find out who ordered the attack.
Comments from author:
To be honest I think the character of Buffy would think Vincent was good looking. However I think its his strength and the ability to keep her safe and is thus an equal that would really appeal to her.

Who ordered the attack will be hinted at--heavily--before the reveal. Its the reason behind the attack that I'm hoping comes out of left field.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from adoxerella
Review:
B&B was my first fandom, so this makes me all nostalgic. Very nice beginning, I am looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks for sharing it.
Comments from author:
You are welcome. I admit I read the fanfiction before I saw saw the show on the Hallmark channel as a child. The fanfiction is what I remember most about the series. Nan Dibble (may she rest in peace) Rhonda Collins, Gloria Handley, Jena Snyder, all became the models I try to emulate when I write.

Thank you for letting me know you liked it.
Review By [adoxerella] • Date [15 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Two" from XanLickquidluv
Review:
Very interesting, I look forward to where you take this lovely beginning.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!
Review By [XanLickquidluv] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Intriguing! Who could possibly be behind this foul plot! Honestly though, enjoying it so far.
Comments from author:
Yes, just who could it be? Or is that whom? UGH! Now I new BETA for my review replies!

Seriously, thanks for the fast review, it helped.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [14 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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