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Review of chapter "Roadtrip Part Two" from lunalurker
A very sweet story. Thank goodness for the happy ending, it really had me worried for just how awful things might end at several points.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [1 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choosing Sides" from Izar
Interfector Mortis does not mean Killer of the dead it translates to dye (as in to color) death. Killer of the dead should be Interfectorem Mortuorum
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and thank you for the correction......
Review By [Izar] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Roadtrip Part Two" from Xovervore
Hi again Lupo. I'm happy to see that Buffy 'LIVES'. Glad to see I was too pessimistic about her chances of surviving the pier incident. But the original story remains great and sad, and this is a happy surprise that comes after.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

Thanks again for reading!

See ya......................
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dream A Little Dream Of Me" from (Past Donor)FaithSummers
I never did finish reading this one so I'm starting back at the beginning. Great characterizations!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the story.

See ya...................
Review By [(Past Donor)FaithSummers] • Date [12 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Roadtrip Part Two" from lovinTiva
I just finished reading both of the stories in the series and I have to say that I loved it even though I wanted to hate it. I never thought of turning Buffy or even Faith for a story. I really liked your story. I'm happy that things ended well for them and that they were able to not only convince the new Slayer that the council couldn't be trusted, but to scare the council as well. Again I say this was very good.
Comments from author:
Thank you! There were other readers who told me that they didn't particularly like Buffy turned stories that ended up reading these. Hopefully they have something for everyone.

If you would like to try another Slayer turned vamp story, check out Electra's 'Dance With the Devil' found here-

It's short, only two chapters, but really good.

Thanks again for reading!

See ya........................................
Review By [lovinTiva] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confrontations" from (Past Donor)FaithSummers
I really like how your switching up the POV's. You write Xand as well as you do Faith!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I wasn't sure if I made him believable or not. Glad you like it.

See ya.........
Review By [(Past Donor)FaithSummers] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Roadtrip Part Two" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Great story. This sequel was much appreciated. I look forward to reading other stories you've written.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comments!

Hopefully I'll write something else you'll enjoy.

See ya................
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [22 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Roadtrip Part Two" from Cutiepie
You didn't mention, but I am assuming that Willow changed the binding on the Gem of Amara to completely spiritual, and no longer physical at all? Because if she didn't, then the Gem is now permanently fused to their souls, and they will have all the benefits of wearing the Gem without the possibility of losing it unless their souls are lost (which also can't happen anymore). Just a thought.

Anyway, despite not usually liking the "turned" slayer stories, I find that I really am fond of yours. Thank you for writing it, and then continuing it. I can even say that I don't completely hate Shannon anymore (although I am sorry for Tara in this universe, unless she can manage to meet someone even better for her than Willow was at the beginning - before the whole magic addiction thing came to be).
Comments from author:
I didn't directly address it, but that was the implication during the conversation they had at the hospital when Joyce and Buffy went to see Faith only to find her missing. I thought that having the girls protected by the gem in both a physical and spiritual manner would actually make them too powerful. :)

Thank you very much for the kind words! If someone can enjoy this/these stories, who doesn't usually like the concept, there must be something to them.

Thank you for following along!

See ya...........................
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Roadtrip Part Two" from PATM
I guess it had to end some time, and so did Travers. The Shannon/Willow story can move on now. Reunited with her family?
Comments from author:
I didn't want it to end either, but this part of their tale is told.

Thanks for staying with it. All the reviews and comments were great.

See ya...............
Review By [PATM] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Roadtrip Part Two" from AllenPitt
Nice to see Travers 'get his', but this is going to cause problems. The Council won't back off-- to them, their murder of Travers will 'prove' that the 2 vampires should be put at the head of their 'kill' list... They might try a waiting game (hoping Shannon will die in the next few months or year) but that's about it. If I was the head of the council, I'd hire the Order of Teraka (and take the sign off the building that invites vamps )
hm, also the council was very useful in helping research (has lots of rare books etc).. so I hope they reconcile someday. Maybe if Glory shows up.
But all in all---good ending!
Comments from author:
I think a lot of what was wrong with the Council was directly related to Travers being in charge. Hopefully with him out of the way, it will revert back to actually being about helping with the fight against evil instead of trying to control the warriors.

You're probably right though, about there being a price on the Slamp girls now. It might take a while for the Council to completely change and in the mean time, there will probably be some splinter groups Faith and Buffy will need to deal with. Not to mention whatever demons they come across while traveling.

Glad you enjoyed the story.

See ya...........................
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer, Slayer Come Out To Play" from (Past Donor)FaithSummers
Wow! I really need to catch up on my reading! I haven't gotten any notifications on this. Can't wait to finish :)
Comments from author:
I know, for some reason I only get sporadic notifications from TtH also. Must be a server bug.

Hope you like the way things play out. Thanks for reading.

See ya...................
Review By [(Past Donor)FaithSummers] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies To The Rescue" from AllenPitt
does willow really need to do both at once? couldn't she just do the ensouling first, rest, then do the joint anchor spell? Just curious.
beyond that, other than a sunlight allergy, and oh yeah, the council wants them dead, they should un-live happily ever after...
Comments from author:
Well you know Willow, why work smart when you can work hard? The sunlight allergy is going to be an unavoidable result of the new living (sorta) conditions. The Council issue however, will be addressed (kinda).

Thanks for R&R's!!!

See ya...............
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who's That Knocking At My Door?" from AllenPitt
I guess they'll have to trade the Gem back and forth, even days for Buffy....... so, that's one way to build a slayer army. Not quite the way the council would want it done, but it can work...
Hm, except this kind of plays into Travers' hands: "See! the situation is worse than I thought!" Evil vamped vampire slayers are over-running Sunnydale! We should have acted sooner!" etc...
Hey--does this mean a new slayer gets called, or does that have to wait for Shannon to die? Also, is Willow up for performing yet another soul-giving spell? She's going to run out of Orbs ot Thessaluh after a while.... and Giles isn't going to be too happy about this either..
Comments from author:
Just a little while longer for the gem story to be explained..........

Yea, a vamp slayer army wouldn't work out to well for the Council, lol.

Shannon was called when Faith 'died' so the line was passed on. Shannon would hav eto die for the next slayer to be called.

Willow can use Giles' orb, it's used to collect the missing soul prior to restoring it so it can be used over and over. Unless it gets broken.

Thanks for all the thought inducing comments!

See ya...............
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Art Of War" from AllenPitt
I suppose the big question then is, will Buffy kill them all or just beat them up? If she leaves them alive then they'll report to the council that the slayers are in league with vampire vampire slayer. That would not be good. ...
Comments from author:
Buff's reaction will probably have a lot to do with whatever condition she finds Faith in. It could get very, very bad.

I'm pretty sure Shannon already clued the Council up that Faith was helping out Buffy when she talked to them at the cemetery. They just don't know that Shannon switched sides yet. That'll be another blow to Travers' ego. He just can't keep these slayers under his thumb. Keeping the slayers from having support from family and friends is probably why the Shadowmen instituted that whole 'one girl in all the world, fighting alone' rule in the first place. It would make them easier to control.

Thanks again for all the great comments.

See ya.............
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Through The Looking Glass" from AllenPitt
Captive vampires that Travers keeps? Interesting. Maybe he justifies it as useful for training watchers and/ or future Cruciamentums for slayers...
* I always thought it was weird the council didn't react when Buffy quit, but went after Faith when she got out of her coma...maybe they figured 'what the heck, she's still slaying, and will likely die real soon now, so why bother?' ---
Comments from author:
I figured exactly that. The Council would need a couple of vamps around for slayer testing as well as probably experimenting on.

I think that Travers was probably extremely put off by Buffy quiting and Faith was bearing the brunt of his frustration. In his mind, he would want to make an example of Faith since she didn't have the support group Buffy did and might be easier to isolate to capture. He might have even been trying to get her to use against Buffy, after a little 're-conditioning' of course.

It might of been nice to see them capture Faith, try and change her, then watch her tear them up from the inside out. Hmm, maybe next time?

Thanks for all the insightful comments.

See ya.................
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
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