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Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Cheshire Gambit" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
I just reread this, and I am as awestruck with the coherence and quality of the storytelling as I was the first time several years ago. It's a shame that this wasn't updated lately, but it looks like you added a bit to this last chapter, in such a way that it looks like it parallels with T3 somehow. Have you had any thoughts about continuing this tale, perhaps an idea for sheltering the Scoobies through the coming apocalypse? Is Judgment Day preventable or is it inevitable?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Cheshire Gambit" from Kirallie
Review:
So more than just the one terminator got sent to Sunnydale? That's not good. Xander and Burke need more backup!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Cheshire Gambit" from DarthTenebrus
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Whoa, frightening. Love the way Buffy reacts to Future Xander, and how cynical he becomes as a result of fighting Skynet for seven years.

And how the demons hate the machines even worse than they despise the humans makes for some pretty good storytelling.

And naturally Faith wants to bang Xander, but more than that, she wants to join the fight against Skynet, didn't take much there, wonder what it would take to sequester the Scoobies until after the bombs fall and they can join the fight...

All in all, wonderfully integrated and very well written, Joss and James would be very proud of you, you'd better get back to work on this thing very soon!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Cheshire Gambit" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Well, hell. Tim died afterall. Poo.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Cheshire Gambit" from BillieBog
Review:
I just found this and it is very interesting, very complex. Wish you had finished it.

thanks,
Billie
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: The Cheshire Gambit" from staticice
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Really cool story, can't wait for more.
Review By [staticice] • Date [19 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Up Inside the Cyclone" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice start and I'm curious what Xander and his friend will do.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [3 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Days of Future Past" from Eureka
Review:
Pretty good so far. BUT one thing I am kinda confused about:In chapter one, you wrote that Oz was the one that Angelus snapped the neck of, but he is alive and well in the next chapter and Mrs. Calendar is the one who is dead. How is that possible?
Comments from author:
Where exactly was that? I can't seem to find the part where I wrote that Oz died. Thanks.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Up Inside the Cyclone" from nemogbr
Review:
Looking forward to more.

THanks,
Obi
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [9 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Days of Future Past" from Loatroll
Review:
Very interesting. Easy to understand even for me that hasn't actually seen either the new Terminator movie or the tv-series. Very good merging of the worlds.
Great work so far. Really looking forward to more.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [4 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Days of Future Past" from Jorrie
Review:
Sigh, how sad, I already finished the newest chapter. *crying face* Anywhooo, great character development, plot structure, writing format. It's got a good depth and is easy to follow. Though I do have a question. Reading about Blair, Barnes, and Kate makes me wonder if you're going to integrate more events/characters from T4. Are happenings from T4 going to play a bigger role in the story? Just a small pondering, no big. Love it so far and I hope to see more appearances from Faith soon. She always was one of my favorite characters. Can't wait, I'll be on the look out! ^_~
Comments from author:
Not really, more characters than specific plot points. The timeline's different, and I'm using the TV show as a basis, so that's the main guide in terms of where people are in the future.

Thanks.
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [4 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Tech Noir" from physicsteach
Review:
Very good to this point. The flash-forward/flash-back works reasonably well, and the cross-over is interesting and everything fits together.

The pacing is pretty good, and other than a few bits where you're describing emotions and consequences rather than letting them come out naturally through character interactions, the writing is solid.

I'm very much looking forward to more, and not just because of the cliffhanger.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Tech Noir" from Fyrloche
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As if things couldn't get worse. Buffy goes jumping to conclusions, again. I wonder how long it will take Xander to convince her that he isn't a demon, possessed, or crazy?
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [6 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Tech Noir" from grd
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Great chapter except for Buffy's hit first response. Hope she gets her act straight.
Review By [grd] • Date [6 May 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Tech Noir" from murdock
Review:
u cliff hanging bastard. give us the rest this fic is so go man.
Review By [murdock] • Date [6 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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