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Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from Angelskuuipo
Oh, I like the start of this. I'm very curious to see how Angel's presence would affect everyone. I hope your muse let's you continue this. :)
Comments from author:
It will. How long it will take me to get back to it, that's something else... :p
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from Christy
hmm, definitely seems like it could be a very interesting story- can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it
Review By [Christy] • Date [3 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
VERY nicely done! This is gunna get good!
-growls- I hate Jar Jar! He's jsut so annoying! I'd love to kick him down a flight of steps or something. If you don't kill him you could always do taht you know -makes puppy dog eyes- Pweese!!!!!!!!
Anyways, awesome chapter and can't wait for the next one. Sorry this review isn't as long as the first one that I posted but I think I ran outat questions for now...-sweatdrops-
Good luck with the next chapter and C'ya then!
Comments from author:
I'll consider it... I too hate Jar-Jar... ;)
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [3 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from wswords
I will be watching this which is more than I can say for most fics. I would say a more, but there isn't enough of the story done yet for me to actually comment. This is really just to encourage you to keep going.
Comments from author:
This story will be continued... ;)
Review By [wswords] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from Zarachek
I don't really have any constructive criticism for your story, since I can't find any faults in your story. The only true gripe about it is update frequency, and that is what most readers have. Anyway, keep on writing as long (i.e. chapter length) and fast as possible. Your story rocks!

Comments from author:
I'll do my best... Unfortunately I can't do much about update frequency. I write as inspiration strikes me... :p
Review By [Zarachek] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from MarcusSLazarus
Firstly, glad to see an update; this story is WAY too intriguing to be abandoned.

Secondly, nice job regarding Angel's knowledge of the 'Star Wars' universe; he knows enough to know the basics, but even without the fact that the prequels hadn't been released on Earth when he left his knowledge of the series is still limited to the essentials without any real DETAIL...

Keep up the good work (And hopefully update sooner than this for the next chapter); I am DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing what happens when Angel and Darth Maul come face-to-face...
Comments from author:
In terms of chapters, you won't have too long to wait until you see Maul... in terms of when I can post those chapters... well, I'll do my best... ;)

Thanks for the compliments. It's much appreciated...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from SnakeFox
I must have read a dozen or more stories just like this, except with Buffy as the main character. And don't me wrong, they were all good, interesting, well written, took their plots in interesting and unique directions... But after a while, they do tend to blend together a bit in my mind.

This story on the other hand is the first I've ever read with Angel in this position. It's good, interesting and well written, but even better than all that, it's fresh. It's a very fresh take on a pretty well worn scenario, and frankly, excited to see where you take it ^_^
Comments from author:
I'm glad the freshness date on the fic is up to par... ;)

Glad to have you on board

I hope I don't disappoint...
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Very, very intriguing! I'm not usually one to read many Angel centric fics, but you have captured my attention. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Comments from author:

I'm not usually one to write many Angel-centric fics, so I suppose we're even... ;)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from mwjen
Good start, first time I've seen this type of story with Angel being the main character. Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:

Glad you're enjoying...
Review By [mwjen] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Imperfect Strangers" from AllenPitt
Let's see... yeah, based on just the 3 original films, not many clues as to what went wrong. Hm, shouldn't Jedi sense that something's "off" with Angel? No life there? Not to mention med- robots someday. On the other hand, doesn't need to breathe, stuff like that, very durable.
* Angel has a photographic (or nearly so) visual memory. Hm, is a great artist too. Wonder if that will come in handy someday...
One irony is that Angel could make huge positive changes simply by staying with Shmi when they all leave; keeping her from getting stolen & abused by the whatever-people; her death at their hands is one of the main triggers that set Anakin off, after all. Or at least, returning and freeing her during the TEN YEARS+ that Anakin was away (the way the Jedi all just left her there was inexcusable).
Comments from author:
Hmmmm... I agree that Angel could contribute a lot with Shmi. The problem being that Angel has no way of knowing that fact. All he knows is that Anakin fell to the dark side and that he was once Obi-wan's apprentice. Not really very much to go on there... Also, while effective, Angel hanging out with Shmi on Tatooine would make for a painfully slow plot... :p

Returning and freeing her might be an idea though... It certainly gives me a different idea for how to handle Shmi... :p

As for what the Jedi sense concerning Angel... I'll get to that in later chapters... ;)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fallen Angel" from Nonlinear
This makes me happy, probably because it fits so well as a crossover. Angel went to away to Hell. Tatooine is Hell. How deviously simple, and there's even a movie quote that applies.

I'm a bit curious if the sun actually would burn Angel. Maybe it will do weird things like it did in the Pylean dimension. Maybe since he's only long ago and in a galaxy far far away, he'll still turn crispy under the Tatooine sun. If it's the former, I have this funny mental picture of him throwing his arms over his head and shrieking when faced with the sun, only to pause and go, "Oh. Not so bad."

Ms. Skywalker is scary charitable, by the way. I guess, though, in a world without a great hospital infrastructure, taking the half-dead guy home would be the proper thing to do. What are her reasons and motivations? Religion? Paying forward a personal debt? Watto attempting to make some quick credits? Virgin Mary levels of benevolence? It's something to think about.

Anyway, I'd love to see more on this idea,
Comments from author:
Tatooine as Hell was certainly my thoughts concerning this... :p

The suns of Tatooine... Explained in my new chapter...

And yes, Shmi is extremely charitable. It might surprise you to know that those who have the least are often the most willing to give to others in need... ;)
Review By [Nonlinear] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fallen Angel" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
OMG!!!!! This is AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've never seen this idea in a SW/BtVS crossover before! It's GENIUS!!!!!!!!! I LOVE Angel and Anakin SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! Will Angel be a kinda mentor to Ani? It'd make a kinda sense to me but then again I am told that my mind can be a very twisted place so what do I know? -shrugs-

I guess it'd be too much to ask for Angel to get a lightsaber but what would happen if he had a light whip? Angel with a glowing blue whip in hand taring through the bad guys would look REALLY cool don'cha think?

I do have one request for you and I hope you agree to it.
-clears throat dramatically- KILL JAR JAR BLUNKS THEN BURN HIS BODY AND DANCE ON THE ASHES!!!!!!!!! Okay, maybe not the burning and dancing part but PLEASE KILL HIM!!!!!!!!! He's a royal pain in the a$$ and I don't really think anyone will miss him THAT much!!!!!

I can't wait for the Jedi's reaction to Angel. I think they'll probably say something like 'The dark force is strong within him but the light has a chance to prevail with our guidence' or something along those lines, or at least some of the council members that totally have their heads up their a$$es will say what while the others'll be kinda nutral. They'll definately be curius about Angel, I think that that's a given. I wonder what's happen if Angel told them about his dimensions version of the 'chosen one'. It'll be interesting.
Do you think that Angel would try and protect Anakin from finding out about the whole chosen one thing untill he's old enough to handle it cuz personally I've always thought that one of the problems was that Anakin was told about the prophecy when he was so small that it let him get a big ego so the prophecy didn't have a chance to happen if that makes sence.

PLEASE update soon!!!!! I REALLY wanna know what's gunna happen next and it's not like I'm a mind reader like Edward Cullen or the Jedi or a seer like the Jedi or Alice Cullen so I'll have to wait for you so PLEASE update before I go crazy!!!!!!!!!
Pretty please with sugar, ice-cream, chocolate, strawberries ans sprinkles on top!!!!!!!!!

Good luck with the next chapter, I'm sure you can tell thea tI'm DESPERATE to read it!!!!!
Until then

Mirani* ---(-@
Comments from author:
All will be revealed...

No dead Jar-Jar... Yet... But I do give him a bit of a lashing... ;)

Next chapter is up...
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [29 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fallen Angel" from Bobboky
excellent, i hope that you keep 'Xander' as Angel's concious...
Comments from author:
Not necessarily as his conscience, but he'll likely be bombarded fairly often by moments of Xander-logic... :p
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fallen Angel" from TwistedSlinky
Very original premise. I can't wait to see where you go with this :)
Comments from author:
*nods* Neither can I... :p
Review By [TwistedSlinky] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fallen Angel" from EternalPrelude
Okay, I wanna see where this is going. Good start so far.
Comments from author:
I'll do my best
Review By [EternalPrelude] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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