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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from SamuraiSky
Review:
Loved it!
Comments from author:
I might be wrong, but I think you're working your way through some of my stories.

Well, that's cool! I write 'em for people to read and hopefully enjoy.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [21 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Balder
Review:
I enjoyed this story a lot.
Comments from author:
Thank-you for reviewing.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Balder] • Date [13 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from TheLandYacht
Review:
I must say, having just clicked on this story...I find something disturbing, or perhaps alluring...at the very top.

Warnings: Some strong language, and a little lesbian wild monkey sex.

I WILL NOT STAND FOR LESBIAN WILD MONKEYS!

Lesbian Willows, on the other hand, I will gladly envision.
Comments from author:
Had to think for a minute which story this was...then I remembered, Willow, sexy terminators, robotic demons and such like.

The 'wild monkey sex' reference is a running joke with a couple of my regular readers.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [TheLandYacht] • Date [18 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Good story, great job meshing the terminator and the Buffy gang. Had some really good funny parts and the whole story was again well written like all your stories.
Thanks!
Comments from author:
Thank-you kindly.

D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from lunalurker
Review:
Loved it! Funny, great episode to cross over with, the blending of dialogue and bits from Buffy and the Terminator movie was just fantastic. And Cameron dying made me sad, which is both good and bad in a way.
Yes, I'd love some kind of sequel. Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Thank-you, it was fun writing that.

I did toy with writing a sequel for a while, there's several BtVS episodes with robots in so there's plenty of choice, but I don't know if I'll ever get round to doing it. Plus they say the sequel is never as good as the original.

A sequel is a vague possibility but don't hold your breath...sorry.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Ansku
Review:
Good fic :)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
D.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from draconis
Review:
Really like the way you're totally twisting the two stories.

Loved the scene with Cameron loading the batteries into the Big Boy 3000! Managing to stay true to the Terminator...yet not. I was imagining the shop proprietress scrabbling back in...shock, nay...fear? Very clever!

I wasn't sure, but was Giles' thought about the giant kitten roaming around London a Monty Python reference?
Comments from author:
Giant Kittens was 'The Goodies', and is an idea that really needs expanding upon. can you imagine Willow chasing a giant kitten through London?

"He's so cute," cooed Willow.

"But he's a hundred feet tall and just knocked over the Post Office Tower!" explained Buffy.

"Yeah," sighed Willow, "but he's soooo cute!"

Thanks for your comment and for stirring up the plot bunnies.

DaveT.
Review By [draconis] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from (Past Donor)Razberry
Review:
This was totally awesome!!!
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Past Donor)Razberry] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
Review:
For some reason, Carstairs description reminds me of Jimmy Edwards.
As for Cameron deciding upon her surname, that was too darn funny.
Comments from author:
Carstairs; actually I was thinking of one of the RAF pilots out of ''allo, 'allo'. And Cameron...well it had to be done.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

DaveT.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
Dude you killed Cameron, so not cool but now there's a chance of Willow Buffy, Yum!

Thanks for sharing
Comments from author:
Well I'm afraid that's what happens to good Terminators...they die saving the human.

Cheers
DaveT
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
I enjoyed this so much that it inspired artwork from me. I hope you don't mind. And one of them is a title image that you can feel free to use if you want. Or you can run screaming from the room yelling "Exterminate! Exterminate! Exterminate!" and I'll delete it. :)

http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-13268-8/Saturn+Saturn+s+Fantastical+Fanart.htm
Comments from author:
Thank-you very ver5y much! That's about the first time anyones done that for me (without a bit of grovling on my behalf!). When I work out how to use it as a banner (I'm not very good with all this computer stuff y'know [leans heavily on his walking stick]) I will.

That's so much,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [12 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from AllenPitt
Review:
gee, I was hoping for happily ever after with Cameron & Willow . Maybe in a sequel? It'd be weird if "Cameron" showed up again. Even if they don't get involved romantically, I'm sure Willow & company remember the names & such Cam. cited & will remember "Tara" ; so in '4th season' Tara might still end up as a friend / involved in their activities, prompting another robot from the future.
* I don't think objects from the future vanish once their future is gone, it's just that they future they're from is gone (note Jess/Derek came from different futures). But Cam. might not have known that...
Comments from author:
The objects from the future vanishing thing was something I got from a very old sci-fi story. It also avoids any messy clean-up/explanations. We won't know until we travel in time. Slso maybe it just vanishes from that timeline...I don't know

Sequel, I'm thinking about it.

Cheers,
DaveT
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Cheers.

DT.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Rednax
Review:
Great fun! You matched the tone of the first season very well.

Your writing delivers an organic mix of the corniness of Arnie's Terminators with the snarkiness of Buffy's Scoobies. Props of course to the respective writers of the dialogue which you adapted/adopted to hilarious effect.

I didn't particularly like your final twist on Moloch's demise, (a minor point of character development), but perhaps you could tie it into a possible sequel. ;)

Willow’s development was accelerated in a near-canonically believable way, in manner if not time (I think the Hell-mouth didn't just evolve Cameron), but perhaps that’s wishful thinking.

Posting two short chapters at the time recalled watching Buffy with its act/commercial breaks, and the short time between posts felt like watching a mini-arc from the original series; but palatably bite sized.

I haven't seen much of the Sarah Conner Chronicles (TSSC), but that series seems to lack the humor of the Terminator 2 movie, and the way you blended Cameron's humanity (taken up a notch) with T-101 robotic inanity was masterful. The TSSC producers would do well to hire you if they are green-lit another season.

Mixing “English-English” and American idiom was pleasantly jarring (a witty story helps); did you learn that and Crossover proficiency at the “University Collage London” [sic] mentioned in your profile? ;) I only went to College, but I do sometimes feel that my education comprised a smattering of snippets pasted together to make a degree.
Comments from author:
Thank-you for your thought provoking and generous review...if only my English teachers could see me now! Ok I know I'm far from perfect but I've learnt more about English Language in three years on TTH than I ever did at school.

My connection with UCL is purely a non-academic one.

Moloch's end, hmm maybe you have a point. I read it through before I posted and it did seem a little abrupt, but it fitted in with the plot line and there were time constraints so I went with it.

I also thought I was going a bit fast with the Willow 'gay-now' thing. But when I looked back at the series it did seem she turned gay more or less over night. So again I went for it! I think it worked.

Chapter length; I've found that a chapter of about 2500 words give or take a couple of hundred has improved my style and posting two together gives the reader something to get his/her teeth into. And yes I suppose it is reminiscent of TV add-breaks...not thought of it like that before.

As for a sequel, well there's a good chance of it but at the moment I've got nothing approaching a plot-line.

We have three robots (I think )in canon.
Ted; just makes me angry and I don't like watching that episode.
April; perky robot girl looking for Warren Meers, of the three this is most likely.
Buffy-bot; this opens several cans or worms. The thing with Glory, the aftermath with Buffy being dead. Not sure I want to go there. Any Buffy-bot story I think would be darker.

Anyway cheers for your comments,

DaveT.
Review By [Rednax] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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