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Review of chapter "Chapter 07" from Thedruid
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Sorry, but this is a bad review. It's a good concept, well written, and good plot. But you ruined it by haveing +70% of every male charcter be gay and falling into a relationship within the first 7 chapters of this story. It is not necisarry to the plot, is unlikely for almost every un-attached male to suddenly have a gay sex drive attached to them, and is very unlikely that previously non-gay cannon charcters to suddenly be so, and be attracted to another male. One to three being gay is possible, but ..... you jump the shark with the amount your putting in this story, and for what? So you can tell how it's diffrent in gayville? To keep some 'drama' going with homo-sexual relations, as if you just can't write a more beliveable hetro-sexual relationship and still keep the story interesting?

I only managed to read to chapter 7 before all the 'I'm gay and that guy is hot!' got too much and too distracting from what is the more interesting and I hope actual main plot. Does the future chapters involve a cuddleing sessions between Hammond and President Hayes? I'm honestly wondering that.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [30 Jul 09] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good stuff overall. Thanks for sharing this tale.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from VillageOrchid
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Hmm. This chapter was a little rushed, but I understand that the characters were feeling rushed as well... a little more description of what people were feeling and five senses details would have been preferred. However the chapter did move the plot along. Just seemed weak compared to some of your other chapters.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from VillageOrchid
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Jack is not a man of faith, but as the reader I hope for some.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from VillageOrchid
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That was very interesting!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from VillageOrchid
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I hope you find someone cool for Sam... like Angus MacGyver who might also be Jack's immortal half-ancient father? Just thinking...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from VillageOrchid
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That was somewhat unexpected, but a good follow through on the mythology and the powers.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from VillageOrchid
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That was cool! I'm glad you didn't foreshadow it with your earlier chapters, only allowed it to be plausible.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from VillageOrchid
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Hmm. That would mean one of Jack's *parents* could be a half-ancient immortal who moved on because of the lack of aging... and he or she would be an immortal who could have children with humans.... and perhaps other immortals.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from VillageOrchid
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I think I read this chapter before, rather quickly. I'm reading your story slowly now... and just wanted to say I think you handled this issue very well. I agree with Jack with the "not in the parking lot!" issue... and I also wonder why Methos thinks he needs to punish himself further when he makes the revelation by telling people that "he liked it." Only in madness, only in madness could he have revelled in the killing. Liking the brotherhood of the horsemen, that I believe. I think he was deliberately provoking Duncan when he added in, "and I liked it!" to see how Duncan would respond.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from blackmoon
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I am so with Jack on that last bit, i hope Methos will be okay. Love this story and the unique way you have forged the relationships, hope to read more soon.
Review By [blackmoon] • Date [28 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from VillageOrchid
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Good moment to seem things together with back-story and bonding.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from kayron
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Cameron will probably have a few more issues to work through, but at least he made the decision that love was worth the risk. Te'lc will stand by him no matter what. Methos is fortunate to have chosen Jack and Jacob to confess to. Both men have fought in human wars and alien battles. They both know what it means to have killed. Methos can't change what he did in the past, but he was able to change his future and part of the will be to help save Earth. Thanks for the update.
Review By [kayron] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 08" from zafaran
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I love Meths at the SGC stories, and I'm glad you started this one. I found it tonight when I was checking the backlog of "Latest Stories" here on TtH, and was delighted to find it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 05" from Difdi
Review:
I find it jarring that someone like Daniel Jackson would use a term like "hara kiri"; It's his job to know other cultures, and using a derogatory term like that is extremely out of character. It'd be like calling someone an Eskimo.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry, it wasn't meant derogatory. I knew just this term for it, but now I changed it to seppuku.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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