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Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Adipose System, 2019" from naplam
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If there was a reason given for why Dalek guns have no effect on vampires it would mean something. As it is, it's just because you say so.
Review By [naplam] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Adipose System, 2019" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Cool.

The storm shields around Earth are awesome, but what's stopping the Daleks from attacking Sol? Best way to stop an impenetrable planet is to remove its heat and warmth ;)
Comments from author:
The same magic that makes Earth invincible also enables them to blast Dalek warships anywhere in the system.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Adipose System, 2019" from Prometeus
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This fic is blatantly, completely, wholeheartedly awesome.

By the way, Earth normal is 78% nitrogen, 21% oxygen. And even in the future, it's highly unlikely 30% oxygen would EVER be considered normal. You see, the more oxygen you have, the more flammable things get and above 25% wildfires become hellish. So a technological Earth would always try to reduce atmospheric oxygen levels below 25% as a public safety measure. And while burning all the coal fields all across the planet wouldn't drop oxygen levels by even 1%, extraordinary measures WOULD be taken to prevent an epidemic of spontaneous human combustion.
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Adipose System, 2019" from SlowMercury
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Very intriguing concept--I can't wait to see all the Scoobies and Fang Gang meet the Doctor! I also liked how the different ships had different viewing mechanisms; it makes sense that the different leaders would enjoy different techniques. And I loved that Andrew named his spaceship "Enterprise." Good work, and I hope to see more of this soon!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Adipose System, 2019" from RevDorothyL
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"...the Gaians could see what battles they could win. But they could not see how to win the war."

I'm glad to see another chapter of this, and I'm impressed by the way you manage to convey the incredible power and coolness of the Gaian magic tech and their formidable leader/warriors, while also highlighting the fact that winning battle after battle doesn't mean there's a 'big win' or final victory in the offing anytime in the foreseeable future.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Adipose System, 2019" from AllenPitt
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Despite their power they probably don't know much about the Daleks (origins etc) so the Doctor could provide them with invaluable info -not to mention on other threats such as the Cybermen & the Sontarans...
Comments from author:
The Gaians are aware of most other Whoniverse species. They have something like an alliance with the Sontarans. The Daleks are the only species who pose a serious threat to the Gaians.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Adipose System, 2019" from SamDragon
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Very interesting.I like it.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: London, 2005" from VillageOrchid
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An interesting and complex AU.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: London, 2005" from Tjack
Review:
Cooooooool!
Review By [Tjack] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: London, 2005" from RevDorothyL
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Love this version of "the Daleks attack! (and get their tinned assets handed to them)" -- especially with Spike leading the vampires into battle as the after-sunset second wave, immune to the Daleks' favorite weapon!

Very happy to see a new chapter of this, and please post more, whenever you can (no pressure, though -- just a whole lot of wheedling!).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Tara Maclay" from Tjack
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Very interesting, if a bit confusing at this point. I hope you'll keep going with it.
Review By [Tjack] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Tara Maclay" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story, so far, is just neat. I laughed when I read Willow's reaction to the trio's answer of "Alternate reality." “Oh. I see.” Lol! I hope you continue your story. One little question. I thought you mentioned a person named "Tara" in the first episode. Was that a mistake, or is there a Slayer named Tara?

Edit: Never mind. I reread the chapter and realized it was the asteroidal ship that your characters were refering to. My bad.
Comments from author:
Exactly. I mean, come on, Willow gets her own friggin starship that is powered by magic tied to the plantlife on it. What else is she going to name it?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [7 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Tara Maclay" from MarcusSLazarus
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OK, in general things are making sense- particularly the vegetation on the "Tara McClay" helping Willow channel her magic- but there's one flaw; why did the Doctor say that he survived the war because he RAN?

The Tenth Doctor clearly stated in "Doomsday" that he survived the war by fighting on the front line, and everything we know about the war makes it clear that the Doctor was the one who ENDED the conflict; to say that he 'ran' from the war is doing the Doctor a COMPLETE injustice!

Throughout his incarnations, one thing has remained constant; when the Doctor discovers evil, he stands up and confronts it, regardless of the cost to himself, and he DOES. NOT. RUN (The Fourth Doctor's escape from the Black Guardian doesn't count; the Guardian was only angry at HIM, he wasn't after anything else).

Change that, and the story's great; as it is, you've completely denied the very ESSENCE of the Doctor's character for no reason.
Comments from author:
My bad. I hadn't seen "Doomsday" when I wrote this chapter (though I saw it mere hours later). I wrote that based on my impressions of the Ninth Doctor - he had a lot of guilt, and it seemed likely that he had run, and in doing so escaped the inferno that destroyed both the Daleks and the Time Lords. I realized the error when I did see "Doomsday".

I'll figure out a way to change it.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Tara Maclay" from RevDorothyL
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Fascinating! And I'm guessing that the lush greenery and atmosphere on the surface of the 'Tara Maclay' is related to the idea of magic being bound to the earth, and Willow and the others needing a portable piece of the dirt and life of old Terra in order to re-charge now and then.

Looking forward to more of this, whenever you're able to post.
Comments from author:
You're clearly psychic. You hit it right on the nose!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Andammarin V" from RevDorothyL
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This is FASCINATING! I really want to read more, as soon as you're able to post.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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