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The Fifth Marauder

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Review of chapter "Flicker" from DragonBard
Review:
Don't like him.

OC like him bug me.
Comments from author:
Give him chance. I know he bursts in and fixes everything here, but he kind of had to be introduced like this. He plays his part in the wider story later on (unfortunately, most of this is still in my head) and does become much less 'perfect'.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Definitely Different" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Definitely Different" from bubble
Review:
OMG I have been reading this story and know that i have an account. I loved this story and i loved the way you did the ending can't wait for the seqeul.
XxXx
bubble
Review By [bubble] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Definitely Different" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
Yep, I liked the ending and can't wait for the sequel. Get to typing!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Definitely Different" from InSmithereens
Review:
Yay, an update and happy ending :) am now going to re-read the story to remember the plot, my mind is like a sieve at the moment. Good luck on results day and I hope got into the university of your choice. Why is it that every fanfic writer I subscribe to seems to be my age? I eagerly await the sequal!
Review By [InSmithereens] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Definitely Different" from FireWolfe
Review:
10/10 This was worth the wait. I look forward to the sequel. Love to see happy ending and pairings for everyone. I almost pity Fudge, Malfoy and voldermort.

Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loop" from winddancer
Review:
An interesting twist and a neat story. The characters come off as human with the failings of us all but their reasons are true. A definite must read! Looking foreword to the following chapters.

Thank you 'momma' for a great read.
Review By [winddancer] • Date [19 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loop" from MamaLadyWolf
Review:
Just found this story and WOW. I think its well written and has a great story line. I would love to read more of it. It was fun to read all of it.
Review By [MamaLadyWolf] • Date [1 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Loop" from Leon
Review:
Great story so far, hope to see an update some time soon!
Review By [Leon] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Circus" from FireWolfe
Review:
Life is rarely black or white. Buffy gets that better than most. I think maybe she hated that Dawn had to learn that lesson as well. Life is often about making the best of a lot of rotten choices. We see it all the time in the world and justice system. I like reading fics that show this struggle it reminds us we all have to choose to be good everyday and sometimes doing the right thing may not be the best thing.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Collision" from Kaleidofox
Review:
Ok, so I am on chapter 28 right now...and I love your plot and story idea, but I am a bit confused. I understand Dawn and Spike's friendship, but you never mention Spike and Buffy's relationship. Did you end up writing that out to make pairings with HP-verse a bit easier to plan out? Or has it simply not come up yet? I mean, if there is still a thing with Buffy and Spike, Dawn seems more upset from his loss than her sister.

I am just curious about that, because I really enjoy your story, and I just wanted to have that cleared up.
Comments from author:
It kind of just hasn't come up, I think. To be honest, it hasn't come up all story. All will be explained at the start of the sequel, though - there's a very Buffy-sorts-herself-out bit coming after the teens leave for Hogwarts.

I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I hope you keep reading long enough to find out!

~ FireSkies xxx
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loop" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
Good writing. Keep it up.
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Loop" from FireWolfe
Review:
This was a wonderful Christmas Present. I so love this story. It is one of the best Buffy Harry Potter Crosses out there. I like the way it is going. Though I can see a bit of an issue coming up with Connor,Nix and Dawn. I agree Dawn did the right thing. However, I see Buffy's side too. Power should never be used casually. I think her fear is Dawn could slide down the dark side like Willow. That being said she had to make a split second choice to serve the idea of Justice. The charges were bogus and politically based. Even Buffy agrees with that one. Sometimes we take shortcuts and break rules. Buffy just hates Dawn had to do that. Great story more soon I hope.
Comments from author:
Glad to see someone sees both sides! Both my sometime-beta-readers only saw one way or the other.

Connor, Nix and Dawn is definately going to become an issue - at the start of the upcoming sequel, I think. The Fifth Marauder was only ever the set-up for the series!

I might manage to get another chapter up today, but if not, MERRY CHRISTMAS!

~ FireSkies xxx
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strike andf Counter-Strike" from spring
Review:
I kinda think tha Hermione went a bit overboard in her reaction to how Dawn, Nix, and Conner are studing for the summer in order for them to catch up wit those that are in sixth year. Of course she does have a tendance to do that sometimes, just not as often as Ron does or as often as she did when she was younger. I love this chapter and I eagerly await the next installment of this wonderful story.
Review By [spring] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strike andf Counter-Strike" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome chapter, I can't wait until you update next. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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