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Review of chapter "Transformers Crossovers" from dialNforNinja
Review:
Blasphemer! May sharkticons feast on your hexnuts! To even suggest a mere fallen Jedi could defeat the Devourer... besides which, as a 'small moon,' even the Darth Star should have been about the size of Uni's head, like his moon minicon.
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [11 Jun 09] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transformers Crossovers" from DHX
Review:
this may be a joke and written in humor... but as a transformer fan well versed in unicron and his powers i have to call fucking bullshit. next time do your research.

EDIT:
poor taste? oh come on! am i suppose to know that Andrews wish cheated? i admit the thought eventually crossed my mind but lets be serious here, in this extremely short, and supposedly humorous story there was no clear indication you were pulling a cheat. I didn't read it dissecting the wording of the wish looking for hidden, or correct interpretations?

if i didnt know transformers damn well i could let it slide. but at face value this story has darth vader death star cutting off 'dark god' Unicrons head. and as a fan that's unacceptable.

so sure you can claim you know your unicron, sure you can claim you dont need to do research. i have the right to respectively disagree and voice my displeasure at the story.

2nd EDIT:

Oh hell no. where the hell did i tell you to change your story for me? hell i tell you what since i'm accused of wanting you to change your story heres what i would suggest you should change.

make it clearer what version of unicron your using, and that andrews wish actually influenced the outcome. as the story stands it comes off in the same vein as writing a story where buffy beats the incredible hulk in a fist fight. without a clear, concise explanation for how such a thing was pulled off it rings false

and heres another thing. i made my comment and was perfectly willing to let that be the end of it. you responded explaining why things were the way they were, that was fine, BUT then you basically accused me of having poor taste for having an opinion that differed from yours. and then you compounded matters by accusing me off something i never did.

news flash, people have hated on stories for less. it is my prerogative, to dislike a story and i can comment on it how i see fit. could i have been politer? yes. (hell if the way i responded to the story offended you, you have the right to call me on such behaviour) but that doesn't mean i should shut up and praise your story.

you know what i'm done. this is not the place to be having such a discussion.
Comments from author:
EDIT RESPONSE:

Ok you're right I may have been confrontational, and I may be using strongly worded phrases towards your review, but to be honest your initial review 'this may be a joke and written in humor... but as a transformer fan well versed in unicron and his powers i have to call fucking bullshit. next time do your research." not only came off as highly confrontational, but it also used expletives. It also openly challenged not only my choice in writing this story, but it came off as a personal challenge concerning the level of my fandom towards the Transformers.

Everything I said was centered around my feelings concerning that open hostility and challenging nature. To such an extent that I made a blanket statement concerning my lack of desire to make changes towards the story because of your negative comments. I appologize for being confrontational, but when somebody uses 'Fucking Bullshit' in a review to express their level of distaste for the subject material it can come off as rather confrontational.

I too have said my piece now and removed my earlier comments for the sake of clarification. However I still fail to see why this story which is a Ficlet needs to be so stuck on the details of either franchise. It's written for comedic purposes and technically is in fact written from the perspective of the characters who have no way of knowing, why Unicron is fighting Darth Vader to begin with, which Unicron it is, why everybody is a Transformer instead of a human or anything else that would require clear and concise explanations. As you put it. The characters don't know, therefore the reader doesn't know, heck in some ways even I don't fully know the reasonings behind it, the muse cooks it up and I go with the flow. Most of the time I'm very clear and concise as to why things happen, occasionally though I'll just want to write something up for entertainment purposes without going into full on detail oriented anal retentative mode. Can I be blamed for that?
Review By [DHX] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transformers Crossovers" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transformers Crossovers" from Mcspender
Review:
Xander & Andrew: more than meets the eye... yeah right :P.
See ya!!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transformers Crossovers" from cwolf
Review:
You do realize that Blur is now Yoda don't you
Review By [cwolf] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transformers Crossovers" from deusexsububi
Review:
nerdiest fic ever. awesome!
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transformers Crossovers" from enderverse
Review:
Those star wars transformers are the dumbest marketing gimmick ever.
Comments from author:
Maybe so, but you have to admit, after seeing a million and one stories in which the Scoobies either go the Star Wars Universe and become a Jedi/Sith/Smuggler/What Have you or the tried and tested YAHF approach, using them as a jump off point for a different type of cross over is more unique than most.

Personally I think they're kind of neat.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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