Nice to see you back! Usually I abhor short chapters but with your stories its never really a problem because you hit specific details that satisfy me yet leave me waiting for the next chapter. I personally would like to see a little bit more werewolf characteristics come through in Richard, Xander, and the two bodyguards. Thanks for another great read!
Review By [BloodyLonesome] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
So sorry to hear you've not been great - depression is a life sapper isn't it? It has been great to see a return of your stories as you are one of my favourite authors; but longer chapters would be great! I would personally love to see Micah display his dominance over Nathaniel and Xander with a little bit of BDSM, a little whipping perhaps before some harsh pounding with neither submissive allowed to come! Anyway, more importantly, look after yourself and be very kind to yourself.
Review By [Ailsam] • Date [16 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Not only should this not be read at work but at home with the kids is a no-no too!!! Do whatever you want with Xander (it's been good so far) but make sure he knows it's happening because he belongs - it's all he's ever wanted after all!
Review By [Ailsam] • Date [28 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
aww. Im so surprised! Thanks soo much!! You're the best! You're definately made my day. ^-^ Another awesome update! You rock! I'll be waiting ur updates (for this and any other story u've written.. b/c for some reaason all my fav stories are from you xd.. im seriously not just saying that).. forever.. xwinterangelx
Review By [xwinterangelx] • Date [28 Jul 09] • Not Rated
This is AWSOME!! As far as kinks go, all I can say is: BRING ON THE TOYS!!!! Nipple Clamps, Chocolate Body paint, Wax, Vibrators (as in more then one at a time), feathers, Spanking, maybe some neat electric toys. Basically if he can be sensually tortured by it, then I say bring it on!!! Wonderful story so far.
Review By [storylistener] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow! You know the short chapters don't really bother me because they're sooo good! I really think that there should be one chapter where the wolves are taken over by their instincts and the dominance and submission kink comes into play! You're doing a really good job grammar and spelling wise with this story and I hope the future chapters are just as great!
Review By [BloodyLonesome] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Jean-Claude said that he could find release in the previous chapter so I think option A. I was wondering if you could develop the relationship more between Jean-Claude, Richard, Jamil, Shang-Da and Xander maybe have a situation where they need Xander's strength and knowledge as well as a bit of romance. Please write more soon I really love this story.
Review By [Slayingsliver] • Date [15 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I would pick option C, but wouldn't that cause some excruciating pain for Xander? Option B is a safe second for me, but I would pick C if you could do something about the pain factor.
Review By [EmruasCat] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated