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Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from Hanzo
Review:
♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
Comments from author:
I hope it continues to please
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from SimplyBulisen
Review:
I really like your story, hope you continue it some day
Comments from author:
I will. Unfortunately RL is clogging my days atm...
Review By [SimplyBulisen] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from trecebo
Review:
I like the track you are taking with this. Xander has always seemed to me to be like Han Solo in the SW-verse: a Force anomaly. Things bend around guys like them, and you've pretty much hit the nail on the head with Xander here in the verse you are making.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm trying my best... :)
Review By [trecebo] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from Almadynis
Review:
Good. I would have stopped reading if you made Xan part of the Brotherhood.
Comments from author:
Really... Woah...
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
I'll try not to disappoint...
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from Narf
Review:
not bad keep up the good work thanks and bye
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Narf] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from sunamee
Review:
Interesting ability that you gave Xander. Make sense too when you see normal Xander surviving so long. I look forward to the next update to this or your other stories like Divisions of Self.
Comments from author:
I will attempt to update with dispatch...

As for Divisions of Self, I just did it ten seconds ago... Enjoy...
Review By [sunamee] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from XanderLuvsAll
Review:
Great story.Will you be updating more quickly for now on?
Comments from author:
*sighs*

I'll update as quickly as I am able but my primary focus is on Time and Again, at this time...

I'm sorry if that's what you don't want to hear, but I really started way too many fics even before I started storing stuff in The XO-Files...

Jasper
Review By [XanderLuvsAll] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Another excellent story, I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it...
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from michaelangelo
Review:
So Xander has the enhanced abilities and skills from his previous possessions/genetic tampering, as well as immunity from directed energy attacks be they kinetic/elemental/exotic but can still be stabbed, cut and slashed? combined with the toughened skeleton you'd be looking like a cross between Captain America and Bruce Willis Unbreakable, a pretty damn lethal combination if you ask me.

I bet Rogue will be happy to finally find a person she could safely touch "nudge, nudge, wink, wink, say no more!". Not so struck on the Zilch name though, kinda reminds me of the sound of something being squashed, 'Negative' 'Zero' or 'Nil' would have been a much better name and more likely something that a scientist would give him. Heh Zero N, Nilman.
Comments from author:
Xander/Rogue huh...

I would never think of such a thing...

*shifty eyes*
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from Tjin
Review:
not bad, he could have been 'Introduced' into a branch of the Morlocks... just an idea... of course now i have this whole 'Xander is teleported to a Hell dimension' plot where he is actually just moved to the savage land... i can see the group going crazy searching the dimensions when he actually never left...
Comments from author:
*snickers*

Now that's an interesting bunny...

As for the Morlocks, the idea's not bad, but how would Xander go about tripping over them? I can't think of a way, myself... Well, not without it being utterly contrived...
Review By [Tjin] • Date [30 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from Vilkath
Review:
Interesting stuff and yeah the Brotherhood are a bad choice. If Xavier can be acused of protecting normal humans to much at the cost of mutants Magneto is just as stupid in the other dirrection. He promotes hatred and war but puts very little thought into the peace he eventualy wants to achieve. Add to that there are some very powerful and disturbed mutants out there that would never bow down to any one and only the fear of what normal humans can do unte them at all. If the threat of normal people was removed and Mutants did rule the world, they would just turn on each other. Magneto runs the perfect little resistant group to take down the established goverment but put no thought into what would come after.

I was disapointed Xander avoided even killing the guard in this chapter, nor did he really achieve anything of note before he fled the facility. Making the end result far to much like Wolverine 2.0 for my liking, a complete lack of memory and a psuedo military training to fall back on. Might as well declare Xander dead and long live wolverine, character death of the worst sort. All done within at the pace of a quick summary mode chapter as well.
Comments from author:
It may seem like that, yes. I'll point a few differences for you. For one thing, Wolverine had massive powers to fall back on. Healing may seem rather minor to some, but it makes him all but unkillable. Secondly there is a matter of personality. Wolverine is the consumate loner while Xander is the consumate team player. Obviously they do have similarities, but I like to think there are enough divergences to avoid turning him into Wolverine 2.0.

Thanks for the review. I do appreciate criticism.

Jasper
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Great Escape" from OdinMage
Review:
I'm definitely liking this so far, but I'm kind of hoping there is more to Xander's power than 'I can nullify stuff that affects me directly'... of course I like super!Xander. In any case, like all of your stories, I want more.
Comments from author:
*sighs*

Take, take, take... I see how it is... ;)



... just kidding :p
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
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