Review of chapter "Prologue: A Meeting Concerning Future Events" from Ironbear
Huh. May 09, and it's 2013 now? I'm gonna hazard a guess that this may no longer be a going concern, but if by some chance it still is then I'll bite on the beta reader hook.
Drop me a note if you're still pursuing this at all and want a proofreader and beta. I find the concept intriguing.
Review By [Ironbear
] • Date [27 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: A Meeting Concerning Future Events" from FireWolfe
Ok this could be interesting.
Review By [FireWolfe
] • Date [16 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: A Meeting Concerning Future Events" from mmooch
It's an interesting idea. I'll be eagerly awaiting where you are going with these plans. I'm not entirely sure, is Ross the invisible girl? Good luck with the story. OH! Is the Gang going to meet this mysterious person or are they going to remain in the shadows?
Comments from author:
Ross is the invisible girl, yes. As for your second question, we'll see. I know which one the character would prefer, but I'm trying to get my head into the situation and the rest of the cast as well as the focus character before I write more. And I'd like to have written two more chapters before I post the next one, so it might be a little while.
Review By [mmooch
] • Date [5 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]