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Review of chapter "Strange and Terrible Things" from RocksandGlass
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You are a big meanie, but still a good writer, so it evens out a bit. Another great chapter, didn't feel like too much or too fast at all, though it has left me wondering if the Carter house has burned down yet. Looking forward to more and seeing how you handle the coming events (whose content I am also curious about).
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange and Terrible Things" from RevDorothyL
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Yes, you're mean, but I forgive you for the sake of this description of Sam's eyes (and what followed right after it!): "all that very-serious-now-you-listen-to-me-buddy blue"
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prodigal Father" from RevDorothyL
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Love the moments between Jack and Sam and the kids, especially!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prodigal Father" from RocksandGlass
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I mentioned that the oven thing is really creepy, right? Because it is. Still a great story though; interesting that you decided to bring Jacob back in. Well written and definitely interesting, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Wanna know what's even creepier? My friend's oven actually does that. She's wondering whether to call an electrician or a priest.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Moving Party" from RevDorothyL
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Always good to see Dave Dixon (and family) and a non-Goa'uld-infested Charlie Kawalski make an appearance, and Sam's response to the guys' vain hope that she'd whip something up for dinner was priceless.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Moving Party" from RocksandGlass
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It was too much to hope for something friendly, or at least benign, that liked to leave the oven on, wasn't it? The malevolent thing is very creepy and written well enough to be scary in a "don't go in there on your own!/ Look up! Look up, damn you!" (yelling at tv screen) kinda way.
Great story still, I like that you're bringing in more characters and the army brat element of Sam that still exists, despite not being in the Air Force, is good too.
Comments from author:
You yell at the TV too? I'm not alone! Thanks for the review.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sam Went Walking By" from RevDorothyL
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Jack and Sam together is always of the good!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sam Went Walking By" from RocksandGlass
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The tantrum is a very nice touch. Interesting so far, keep it up.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [6 May 09] • Not Rated
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