Review of chapter "Out of the Mouths of Babes" from SwimTeam
Review:
Loved it especially Spike, Libby and Gem. Keep up the good work. Update soon, please. Rory :)
Review By [SwimTeam] • Date [10 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Death and Second Chances" from SwimTeam
Review:
Nice moment for Connor and Cece. Update soon:) Rory
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed. Updating now! Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [SwimTeam] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Of Death and Second Chances" from kayron
Review:
Wonderful! Cordelia handled Alec perfectly. She made him SEE them. They were real. They were a family. They were worth holding on to. I think that by helping CeeCee, Connor helped himself to heal as well. Whatever way things were before, what they found with each other was their reality, and why would they give up a chance that they might not get again. Also, I realize that he was probably trying to be helpful, but Angel is really a bunbler at times.
Comments from author:
Yes, Angel is often the least helpful when he is trying to be helpful...:)
I'm about to post the next chapter, so I hope you enjoy!
Thank you for reading & reviewing
Review By [kayron] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories and Their Altered States" from noturbaby
Review:
Really like this story. You've combined two of my favorite characters. Yea!!!
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying. Thanks for letting me know!
Review By [noturbaby] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories and Their Altered States" from Alexis
Review:
Great chapter! I like how Cordelia and the rest of AI are having a good influence on the transgencis. And I love how fiercely Max claimed the AI team as one of her own - even if she did cave at the first sight of pink glitter! *snerk*
Comments from author:
Yeah, when I was writing that chapter, I got interrupted by this girl going door-to-door with school fundraiser. She had a pink glitter binder and it scared me. We had a little discussion about how the fundraiser sheet says right on it that students should not go door-to-door for safety reasons and she scampered away, but I'm still traumatized by the pink glitter...
Review of chapter "Memories and Their Altered States" from kayron
Review:
OH WOW!!! Angel's wish may have been good intentioned, but so was Connors 'happy family' life, and that got blown apart. It was okay when Connor didn't know, but once he did know he didn't feel like anything was real. Maybe the fact that Angel didn't ask for anything specific, and Connor made a decision to try to be happy, means that Connor did have a choice in what his happiness would be. The same would be true for Alec and Cordelia. Angel didn't wish for the couple to be together. The individuals chose each other. I hope that they realize that before they wreck their relationships.
Comments from author:
You said it! Hopefully, the next chapter will meet with your approval...
thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories and Their Altered States" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Weirdly enough when you replied to my review I was reading this story...I hadn't looked who had wrote it...just saw it had Connor in so thought 'MUST READ'..Lol!
Wonderful, I like how everyone is slowly becoming more effeicent. I would like to see more of this relationship between Spike and Connor though...
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying. There's a little bit of Connor & Spike in this next chapter, but not much. I'm sure there will be more in the future, though...
Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [11 Sep 09] • Not Rated
I like how Cordelia was able to calm Alec's fears. It's a lot for him to take in. Good thing he can roll with the punches.
CeCe and Conner are cute together.
Comments from author:
He's certainly had enough punches in his life to learn how to roll with them!
I love to save minor characters, so I'm thinking that CeCe and Connor will be getting quite interesting in future chapters, especially with the plot twist I have coming...yes, I'm evil...:)