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Xander-Wing Book II

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Review of chapter "The Gang" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Please, please, please! Consider writing more to this fic! I love the Ranma/Xander fics and there just aren't enough of them!
Comments from author:
This one I definitely want to continue

Raf
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Gang" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Nice series so far. I hope to see more of it one day.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Gang" from DCG
Review:
Well.. wow. Thats getting interesting. I wounder how that group will react when they find out the reasons they need the extra training. And about them all doing demon hunting, side effect of hanging out with cute death is just a bonus.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [DCG] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Gang" from ktweaver
Review:
great series of stories. I read them all in one day!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where do we go from here?" from Rune
Review:
Do you have an outline for this? Could you send it to me? NightWing II is good but I'd like to see more of this story too. I have a few ideas of what could happen if you're interested.
Review By [Rune] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where do we go from here?" from firedrakegirl
Review:
this story is amazing! I read all 3 parts in one afternoon! I can't wait for more!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Gang" from nemogbr
Review:
I was just thinking that Xander or Batman could end up empowered when Dr. Fate retires for awhile.

He could gain the same powers as Fate and have the ability to manipulate the magics of Chaos and Order.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fate_%28comics%29

Won't that make the Bat Clan have an even more interesting life.

Not sure how Batman would feel being a conduit for beings who desire to control his destiny.

Regards,
Obi
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Gang" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapter.


::Gives the plot bunny some Carrot Salad::

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Joy is the simplest form of gratitude
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Gang" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
To borrow from another author of Ranma chaos;

"Chaos needs no recipe. But the ingredients are gathering."
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Gang" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Tendo Dojo" from Dragonelf
Review:
Nice series you have written so far and I am already looking forward to read any future additions to it.

::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad::

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The ideas that have lighted my way
have been kindness, beauty and truth
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Comments from author:
Thank you.
I'm just a little bit under the weather. I should be okay in a few more days. I just don't have the energy to do anything for a while.
Raf
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [23 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Tendo Dojo" from missinglink
Review:
Poor poor Xander. Could be worse fates I guess. Still to be tied up in the Tendo mess that exists... ugh.

Also noticed the interplay with Cass-y-D and Ranma. Maybe make Akane jealous a bit with his attention on her. Her frustration with him almost in a Moose and Shampoo relationship. Him wanting her, her wanting another guy. Probably not what you will do, but it would be funny for Ranma to be the one on the outside wanting the girl who is interested in another for a change.

Really am eager for Happosai's meeting with and training of Xander. Should be good for several laughs.

Keep it coming. Great work as always. Thanks. Later.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [missinglink] • Date [18 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Tendo Dojo" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Tendo Dojo" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Maybe Xander can find someone older than him who was adopted into the House of Wayne. Either a cannon character or a nephew of Alfred, perhaps?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
I'm not sure there's anyone older.
Alfred? I don't see it.

Raf
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Tendo Dojo" from Infinix
Review:
I have been following this series since the first chapter and have largely enjoyed it but after another failed attempt at reading The Worst FanFiction Ever aka My Immortal(farthest I've got is chapter five) my crap o meter is completely broken and the little misspellings and grammar problems in this that I would usually ignore were really annoying. So I urge you to please get a beta not only for future chapters but also to clean up those already posted.
Comments from author:
Done and done.
Say hello to my Beta kdlorente.
Thank you for the review.
Raf.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
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