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Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from gaulty
Review:
interesting story, byes
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [gaulty] • Date [4 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from MBB
Review:
An hilarious story, and absolutely a keeper. So many different sorts of jokes in abundance, and some clever anti-gauld military strategies on top.

Although I am mildly curious about that Army of Rabits. If it's Jaffa leader was Hefn'er, we know what Anya was affraid of.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

Unut really was the Egyptian God of Rabbits.
Review By [MBB] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Oh my. I giggled at some of the name choices, but I'll admit that a few of them alluded me. Pizza Hut, Teacup, Walmart, Bra strap... ^_^

Fun read. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from ColleenStClaire
Review:
This is so many different types of pure crack... anal probes, puns, Bras'trap... I'm laughing despite myself... thank you :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! Sorry it took so long to reply, I didn't see the review at the time.
Review By [ColleenStClaire] • Date [21 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from Gideon
Review:
Olaf really comes into his own in this story. I found it highly amusing, especially all the Jaffa names - even if I am not sure if all of them are meant to be funny or not. Rhona and Mitra?
Comments from author:
Thank you!

Rhona and Mitra are a tribute to the actress Rhona Mitra, star of 'Doomsday', the girl who was intended to be Lara Croft until the studio made the catastrophic mistake of miscasting Angelina Jolie in the role instead.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from GundumM
Review:
so very silly
Comments from author:
Indeed.
Review By [GundumM] • Date [20 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from laoshi
Review:
I just like to begin by saying all of the Trolling On series rocks, but this story has to be my favourite.. This isn’t the best place for me to wax lyrical about your peculiar genius for writing OCs, many of your stories surpass this one in that respect so I’ll just say I found Cephnet and his court to be very believable. But of course what sets this particular story apart is the puns. I’m in serious need of a blackadderism here something along the lines of you being the puniest punner that ever punned, only not rubbish. (There’s reasons why I mostly stick to the reviewing).The names were brilliant, but my favorites got to be whim to his every panda. I enjoyed the way you worked the Asgard into Willow’s opening dialogue. Also it was really clever the way you employed the chocolate metaphor while simultaneously heading off any queries about it’s historical accuracy.

I understand from reading previous reviews you don’t want to do a sequel. I’d love to read one bit if inspiration doesn’t strike I’m sure the next installment in the series will be equally as entertaining.

P.S. Burgerbil. Marvelous
Comments from author:
Thank you! It was a lot of fun to write.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from cptquinn
Review:
Absolutely crude!!!
You sure know my kinda humor...lol

As for a sequel, maybe a follow-up visit by the new SG1, Vala flirting and Olaf wanting 'Merry Sport'.
Comments from author:
Thank you! If I ever decide to do a sequel Vala will, indeed, probably make an appearance.
Review By [cptquinn] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
"Hello, Norse?" That was truly awful - I love it! Now how do I get the coffee out of my keyboard?
Comments from author:
Thank you! Afraid I don't have any suggestions about the coffee in the keyboard, although a product called Vesicare Cyberclean is very good for getting dust and crumbs out. Perhaps a trained anteater could lick it out?
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [14 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from TheMightyFloyd
Review:
So... hilariously... wrong...

I laughed, I cried, I "P'd" my pants! A nice entertaining story.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [TheMightyFloyd] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Delightful! Olaf makes a wonderful slayer of Replicators and Goa'ulds!
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
Review:
...SEQUEL!
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I'm afraid there probably won't be a sequel; I'm not sure there is enough plot to sustain the funny for another story, unless some fresh inspiration hits me.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
A mo'st mar'velou's sto'ry.
Comments from author:
Th'ankh yo'u!
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from Zarachek
Review:
Absolutely hilarious, nice naming of the Jaffa by the way. To bad you don't want to continue this. This as a full story would be priceless entertainment... well, at least to me, since I seem to be enjoying almost every story I read...

~Zarachek
Comments from author:
Thank you! I don't think there's enough material left in the scenario to continue it much further, at least while keeping up the funny, and so I thought it best to end it there.
Review By [Zarachek] • Date [13 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Olaf Through The Stargate" from Infinix
Review:
My first thought is that you belong in a special level of literary hell reserved specifically for writers of bad puns because here's the plumbing joke, and the line it crossed is about a mile in the other direction. Then I started thinking that I am not even sure if the names count as puns or what... So I guess I'll settle for saying I found this amusing.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Infinix] • Date [13 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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