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Review of chapter "Bad Magic" from Harry
Review:
So, Lindsey knows something of what is going on, eh? Time to squeeze him, and MAKE HIM TALK! Especially if he was responsible for what is going on with Cordelia.
Comments from author:
Eh, Lindsay doesn't know anything about Cordelia... he does know about other things, though... Ve haf vays of makin you thalkkk!! ;-)

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bad Magic" from spk
Review:
Ecstatic to see this story updated. Can't wait to see what's next. :)
Comments from author:
So glad to be able to bring you a little ecstasy! There will be more soon. The brain is chugging along dumping ideas into the pot.

thanks for your continued support.

blue
Review By [spk] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The breaking in the dreams" from Harry
Review:
When you get a slayer dream, that means you hit the panic button. Slayer dreams mean trouble, BIG trouble!
Comments from author:
Big trouble. And the Air Force Slayer responds. After all, this is Air Force business.

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I put a spell on you – 'cause you're mine" from Harry
Review:
Well, the Scooby Gang now know why Angel did what he did. To protect family, almost anyone would do what is needed to protect them. And that means making a deal with the Devil per se. Time to talk to some people and try and get more answers.
Comments from author:
Time to do dangerous things and run on home because the circular spinning device is about to have a lot of brown stuff all over it.
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Wounds... old confusion." from Harry
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People from W&H?*Snorts* Those idiots are hit first, ask questions later. And Angel got raked over the coals but good by Buffy. I think that Angel is going to have to do a lot of work to reestablish a good relationship with Buffy and the Council.
Comments from author:
I don't think a good relationship with Buffy is possible. Not sure about the council, but other than Faith, he's not gonna have too many friend there either.

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Perspectives, Old Wounds" from Harry
Review:
To hear that B and F have healed some of their wounds enough that Faith wants Buffy to be head of the council shows the respect and friendship that has developed. Enough that when this situation in LA popped up, she called Buffy and got a team mobilized. Now, time to clear up this problem in LA and find the new slayer.
Comments from author:
Buffy and Faith have more in common than ever before. Surviving Sunnydale gave both of them a great deal of perspective. They're the chosen two. And of course, it's mutual... because Buffy wants Faith to do well as much as Faith wants Buffy to be in charge of the council...
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What you know is right..." from Harry
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Now, more then EVER, I am glad that the First took out the old Council! To do that to a person, is DISGUSTING! If QT was still around, he would be on a large spit over a BBQ pit, SLOWLY being roasted! Or, give him to a group of demons to have sport with. Quentin Travers was a SPOILED IDIOT!
Comments from author:
Travers is one of the characters I hate the most on Buffy. I feel about him the same antipathy that I feel for Kinsey on Stargate. I think they're odious, officious, selfish little creeps. Being blown up was too good for him.
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Warrior's Heart" from Harry
Review:
With what Buffy told Teal'c, it proves just how much she cares about her, and he, her. Do NOT try and come between these two. You do, YOU WILL PAY!
Comments from author:
Yes, it is true love and warrior love. Do not mess with these two. No matter who you are.

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Big Damn Heroes in Trouble" from Harry
Review:
Well, this new team reminds me of when B first came to Sunnydale. And the trouble: OH, does it remind me of Fluties days as the principal. Hopefully, with some help, they can get the kids out of trouble.
Comments from author:
Fortunately, though they have the 'mean students' they don't have Snyder as principal... they just have the honor code to get by. Fortunately, they also have the 'real' scoobies.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Directions" from Harry
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I think that Hammond is definitely giving the idea of Jon or Sam taking over command of the SG1 team some serious consideration. And if Jack does retire, that means he can spend time with Janet when they are not busy. Works for me!

As for Janet, she and Xander might make a good pairing, unless Red takes a shine to her.
Comments from author:
Things are definitely getting shook up. I think it may be a while before Hammond gives command to Jon, but it's not as if Jon doesn't have the experience.

Who's going to spend time with Janet?

Edit: You noticed that, did you? Don't tell anyone! ;-)
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lovers and Generals" from Harry
Review:
Well, Jack may not be happy with Jon wanting to settle down with Dawn, but Buffy has no problem with it. And if Teal'c has anything to say about it, he WILL be leaving Cheyenne Mountain and moving out to be closer to Buffy. And if SGC and the brasses above them have a problem with that, TOUGH!
Comments from author:
You can't stop true love. Poor Jack. Doesn't know when to leave things alone. Teal'c will definitely want to be with Buffy. Everyone is starting a new life.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I felt your heart so close to mine" from Harry
Review:
Very well done chapter. And the use of Roberta Flack's First time that I ever saw your face: Perfect!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. This may well be my favorite love scene in any of my stories. I really wanted to evoke the feelings of first times and the ways it can be both scary and beautiful.

And I love that song. It is a perfect first time song.

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "With Friends Like These..." from Harry
Review:
Jack respects Xander. Anyone who can cut through the BS and get through to him, has to be someone special. If Xander should be giving anyone the shovel speech, it should be Jon in regard to Dawn.
Comments from author:
Well, I sort of figured that Dawn had Buffy to give the shovel speech to Jon. Because if Jon ever hurts the slayers sister, his life and his butt are both in jeopardy. Yes, Xander is part of the unity and he sees Sam as a friend. He's adopted her. I think it's good for them both.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rainy Movie Day" from Harry
Review:
It looks like both couples are having their fair share of problems, but are trying to deal with it. Hopefully, dinner will start smoothing feathers for both groups. As far as the ratings, change it on a per chapter basis.
Comments from author:
Everything changes... sometimes change is a very good thing. Sometimes even dinners go well.

Thanks
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Now... for something completely different!" from Harry
Review:
Well, now we know who the Academy Slayer is and where she came from. Now, we need to figure out if she is going to stay on her own, or join up with the other slayers.
Comments from author:
Or she might, you know, get her own scoobies and do her own thing... ya know... and continue as a student at the academy.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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