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Train from the west

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChefJackButler
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Once again, well done story. Enjoyable. The fact that in America trains have CARS and not WAGONS was an unnecessary distraction that would have been easily avoided with the barest of research.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [19 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Brilliant.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
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Just a little heads up as to terminology. Since the story is set in the U.S.A. with Americans as the characters you need to know that NO ONE calls train cars "wagons" here. There are freight cars and flatbed cars and box cars etc. but not wagons. Technically I suppose they are wagons in the sense that they are pulled and they ride on wheels but when you say wagons we think of horses or oxen pulling wagons through the old west or we think of a child's little red wagon not train cars. The ones this takes place in sound like box cars to me. Big sliding doors on the sides and completely enclosed right?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting. Do you mean "be very careful with *what* you find" ? Also interesting, the only other character that I know of who said, "I know everything" was Ianto Jones. Was he quoting this character? I could see him being a fan of CSI which had been on for many years. Don't watch it enough to know, though.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthTenebrus
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Bloody brilliant, mate! Sensing something larger in the works here, all this is going to come to a head sometime down the line, but how much and when? Who else is going to become entangled in this whole Jedi business?
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [1 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
can't believe i didn't review this the first time. As usual, brilliantly written. I like it when the competent are flummoxed by the evidence. Every now and then we need our world view thoroughly challenged.

Peace,

blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HolyKnight
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Gotta be interesting to observe, when Grissom finally gets dragged into the "Big World" outta there.......
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [19 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
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Excellent job with this story and I hope you will get inspired to write a for this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Shrimp Sandwiches::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BillieBog
Review:
Great little off shoot. Love the way you weave so many worlds together.

Thanks,
BB
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KzintiKiller
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How the hell did I miss this? Excellent work! The character voices were dead on the money. So, I take it that Gill won't be popping up in Sunnydale? ;-)

Rick
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [26 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ansku
Review:
Love it :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CJNyfalt
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Good story. Will you follow up on this one?
Review By [CJNyfalt] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SadJack
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LoL. Well that was interesting. I kinda like it, but at the same time I don't. Might be because I don't watch CSI that often. But I heard that Grissom is leaving the show. Maybe you could just have him retire away from the show and go finish his weird or unexplained cases like this one. Something that gives him one last hurrah and ties up a hidden loose end. But I do like your writing and I hope to see more of "Terran Jedi" soon.
Review By [SadJack] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from prehensileclaw
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Very cool...
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
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More please? This is so very good. Maybe a bit with Grissom and Brass in Sunnydale in Terran Jedi? Please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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