Bloody brilliant, mate! Sensing something larger in the works here, all this is going to come to a head sometime down the line, but how much and when? Who else is going to become entangled in this whole Jedi business?

can't believe i didn't review this the first time. As usual, brilliantly written. I like it when the competent are flummoxed by the evidence. Every now and then we need our world view thoroughly challenged.

Peace,

blue

Gotta be interesting to observe, when Grissom finally gets dragged into the "Big World" outta there.......

Excellent job with this story and I hope you will get inspired to write a for this story.

::Gives the plot bunny some Shrimp Sandwiches::

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Great little off shoot. Love the way you weave so many worlds together.

Thanks,
BB

How the hell did I miss this? Excellent work! The character voices were dead on the money. So, I take it that Gill won't be popping up in Sunnydale? ;-)

Rick

Love it :)

Good story. Will you follow up on this one?

LoL. Well that was interesting. I kinda like it, but at the same time I don't. Might be because I don't watch CSI that often. But I heard that Grissom is leaving the show. Maybe you could just have him retire away from the show and go finish his weird or unexplained cases like this one. Something that gives him one last hurrah and ties up a hidden loose end. But I do like your writing and I hope to see more of "Terran Jedi" soon.

Very cool...

More please? This is so very good. Maybe a bit with Grissom and Brass in Sunnydale in Terran Jedi? Please?

I'm with eriktheviking, it does seem like I read it before. Interesting, though :)

Unlike the other reviewers, I'm a little wary of a sequel, because it might mean that you'll bring the CSI Las Vegas characters in the story. This might "dilute" it somewhat, because you need to take time to treat all chars... that's hard to do well. (Plus, if you start treating them as individuals, and show them interacting one-on-one with characters from SG-1 and Buffy, it's even worse - the number of relationships grows exponentially.)

Anyway... you're a great writer, so I'm looking forward to anything you write :)

Hope you tie this in to the main story. Hope to see a sequal.

Very nice. Stands alone, but also sets up for possible sequels. Best way to write a story. (and a crossover without including anyone outside of the CSI universe, nice trick)

But wagons? That kind of threw me off, wondering where you live, since I've never heard the segments of a train called anything but 'cars'. I kept picturing something like a covered wagon like the early pioneers used going west.

Nice tack on to the larger story. Unsure the ultimate use/purpose of maybe including them in the larger Terran Jedi story as a whole, but then I am simply the one commenting. It is up to the author to make sense of how to incorporate it.

All the characters played well in respect to how they are portrayed on the show. Will be interesting to see the cause of the damage and dead demon. Maybe a splice of the description of the battle in between further investegation by Grissom and whomever he might take with him to Sunnydale. JMHO, but you might be best off writing another one off with CSI Vegas' sojourn to Sunnydale completely seperate from the main story. That way it doesn't disrupt the flow of the main story, but still tells their involvement in the fight with the night (or is that with the knight?). Ahh well, just wanted to says props for a nice addition. Later.