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Review of chapter "Beginnings and Endings" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Interesting storyline!! So, looks like Buffy may become a pilot!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginnings and Endings" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
VERY original idea you’ve got here, to say the least.

Your blend of Slayer history with the history of the Twelve Colonies works out very well- particularly the idea of Giles being from Tauron-, while the additional touch of Tara being related to the Adamas gives the Scoobies an excellent ‘in’ with the core “Galactica” crew that they are DEFINITELY going to need with the CYLONS after Dawn...

Just one query; did the ‘Angel Investigations’ team manage to get off-planet- you’d think they’d have a better chance of it, given that they had IMMEDIATE ‘access’ to Cordelia’s visions-, or were they unable to escape due to an inability to access a ship or something?
Comments from author:
Thank you.

And, on that query, that is left intentionally ambiguous. More information will be available as the story goes on its sequels.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beginnings and Endings" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Really nice touch with the Cylons filling the role of the Knights of Byzantium.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginnings and Endings" from AllenPitt
Review:
So the Cylons are also the Knights of B? Ouch! Hm, still no word on Angel's group--he got warned, there's a chance some of them made it out.
hm, new slayer they turn against her. Would be weird if an 8 got all chosen...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 7" from sropike
Review:
I applaud you!

You continue to seemlessly mesh the two very different universes together. That's a great achievement!

I especially liked Buffy's prayer for Faith in the last paragraph. Very well done!


sropike
Review By [sropike] • Date [9 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 7" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, that makes sense--I wondered how Joyce and Riley & Spike didn't make it out. Who knows maybe they did & will end up getting picked up by the Pegasus. that would be strange...not that the P. was big on rescuing people of course.
If Faith is dead, then a new slayer might have been chosen from a Potential with the fleet. Lots of interesting possibilities...
Buffy should volunteer for the pilot training program. Considering the rejects/idiots Kara was training....she'd shine in that capacity-
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 6" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story continues to hold my interest. Big time. Lol! I am still impressed with how easily you have integrated the two universes. I look forward to more frakking goodness.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 6" from AllenPitt
Review:
with Buffy's luck the entire council made it out and wants to talk to her... she'll be in danger of being suspected of being a cylon if she isn't careful. Maybe that priestess who was in the early part of the series could vouch for her, if she knew she was a slayer? hm, those oracles who take drugs etc might be able to 'see' Dawn as a ball of green energy. And I'm still hoping some of the Angel team made it to a ship. They had even more warning than Buffy's group did...
So--is Faith now dead... and if so was a new slayer called from among the survivors?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 6" from Oranda
Review:
Wait! What about Cordelia! Get that Xander boy back here and make him tell us what happened in L.A. Hopefully it will be in the next chapter. Please post again soon.
Review By [Oranda] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 6" from (Past Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Look forward to every chapter of this fic, thanks for the update.
Review By [(Past Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 5" from sropike
Review:
Very nice chapter, superbly written.
You keep the unknown by NOT elaborating on how the group lost Joyce (Even if I don't particularly like that, as she's one of my favourites), you keep atmosphere of despair and the hunted feeling. You managed to blend Buffy and Co into the Colonial saga quite seemlessly.

I salute you!
sropike
Review By [sropike] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 5" from CPTSkip
Review:
This part of the first BSG series always tears my heart out. I know there was nothing that could save the people on the slower than light ships, but it still tears my heart out. But at least most of the Scoobies are together. Your story rocks.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 5" from apollo
Review:
You use the word "Karom" twice near the end of the chapter where it should read "mark." Other than that, it is good.
Comments from author:
That's actually a stylistic choice. In the Miniseries, there were many times when they used modern English terms and forms that were eliminated from the series at large; I simply am making these consistent by modifying them to fit the rest of the series. For example, in the Miniseries, "Jesus!" is used as an expletive and the Colonials repeatedly refer to "God" instead of the gods (notably, in this chapter, "Oh my God, they're Cylons!" is the original line). I do believe "Mayday" was also used instead of "Krypter" in the Miniseries as well, though I don't swear by that one.
Review By [apollo] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 5" from Grindhall
Review:
This is very very cool! I'm not quite happy with the sudden jumps backwards and forwards but that's a small complaint. The characterisation is great the emotion and scoobie interaction all good things.
It looks like the way you have things set up it'll be pretty hard for the scoobies to make any major changes in the nBSG timeline with things going down hill till we hit the lets throw away our tech and live as hunter gatherers ending which is sad still it looks like it'll be a great story of the scoobies life on the RTF in the meantime!

Hope to see more soon.

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Grindhall] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's story, pt 5" from Mcspender
Review:
You know, it could be cool to see Joyce with the resistance team.
Cool chapter, see ya!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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